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:lines:VERTigoICAL
lines down paper
run down paper
run down your body
curves on your body
lines of your body
vertIGOical
drawing lines:
in circles(i go i go)
vertigo(i go i go)
vertical lines they go
all these things i never knew about you
and now i smile when yr in the room
and get all weak knees
and i go vertigo
like lines on paper
my heart spills out
in circles(i go i go)
VERTigoICAL
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Comments: 6
spin, spin. make the words swim and do a little dance at the beginning, fall then sway til the end. whoa!
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there is an undertow of nausea here- the carsicky feeling involved in the repetition of the word 'go'. i think this is fantastic- even if you invoke a feeling like that, it is big-time success that you invoked such an unusual feeling in a reader.
excellent experimental work here... and you KNOW i of all people appreciate uniqueness!
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"Brilliant"
new york times
hehe j/k very sweet dude. i love your work keep it up mang.
Infinion
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Nice work here meg. You seem to make my mind think about so much when I read your work. The work is so soft and subtle but comes across at the end with a huge impact. Brilliant.
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:step-by-step: the dance of life is learned
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I like the meaning here sweet.
*MUAH*
visit paper-dreams and share.
http://committed.to/paperdreams/
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