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:with you as the
abscissa to my ordinate
a way is always found
to abscise the ordinary
for weeks still,
my pillows hold your hair
and i remember your key
to the secrets thus locked within me.
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You see, this is the way of math. Not only is it foreign matter to some/my brain, but I read this poem and understood it, exactly, as it stood. Then I read your comments and it made me question my summation. So, I thought about this and decided to accept it as cut and dried. I decided not to allow any variables into the equation which would cause confusion because I also decided that I, only, saw the truth, that math is foreign matter so some/my brain so I understood this poem, exactly, as it stood. (what is an abscissa)...Joy
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my pillows hold your hair
i liked the ending crush. this is fine writing with just the right touch of love-spice.
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wow very nice!
the twisting of words and meaning is amazing, a very suprising poem.
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it's a good poem and you almost loose me in your words. how they twist and turn! wonderful poem meg, glad you're working on smashing the writer's block.
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john, as much as i enjoy figuring out math problems, i still find myself speaking your poem word for word trying to let all elements fall into place.. and still unsure if i get the thoughts correctly. but very interesting.. being incomplete without the other then finding things to contradict, seeking to understand the variables that you know yet you refuse to acknowldege. i told you i'm lost..
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whoa man this really purty, very nice idea here.
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