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MikachuKuro — Toy-Store App: Clown

Published: 2011-06-07 07:20:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 4104; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 0
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Description I didn't make it~! Clown is appearantly a shota XD
So for future reference-- he is yandere, not shota (the shota-ness is a ruseeeee >3<) proof [link]

Mah OC for
Ahaha. Sorry I made him so darn shiny. I rike shiny >:U
And would you consider him a shota? O~O


◊ Name: Clown

◊ Age: Appears 13-ish, though he is actually over 150 years old

◊ Gender: Male

◊ Height: 5'1 (152.5 cm) with his shoes. They make him an inch taller.
[one foot as a marionette]

◊ Job: Reaper (Soul Harvester)
Because of his sad past, he has a bit of a "darker" sadistic side (that extremely seldom shows). Something that happened with "Ojii-san" caused him to have a sort of. . . umm, "Not all souls deserve to live" morale, and he takes the souls of truly evil people (Like a serial killer, or something like that XD)
He also has a strong sypathy for people that had an died unexpectadly or early, and takes their souls to be re-animated as living dolls.

◊ Species: Living doll (Marionette)

◊ Weapon (if any): Hammer (I'll make a ref laterrs)

◊ Abilities(if any):
If he is close to death in a fight, he unvoluntarily goes into a sort of daze and he loses his reason and his only objective is to murder his opponent. His body grows limp and he moves around as if being manuvered by strings. He strikes a lot with his hands (like scratching you XD) or hammer and when he moves its really . . . Uhm floppy (? XD) In this form, he is more powerful and agile, but it can only be used for a short time depending on how much damage he's taken, so he tries not to have a long, drawn-out fight (if he has to fight at all) or retreat.

Sometimes when he makes contact with someone, he can see into their past. Although most of the time he is unaware that the visions he sees are from the other's past, if he sees far enough/ receives a lot of information, he can peice together the information. The amount of insight he recives depends on the other, and is affected by location, what's going on at the moment, and the other person themselves.

◊ Personality:
Clown is really nervous and shy around others, and acts very polite and friendly. When he enters a room, he rarely announces that he entered, so as not to bother anyone. He enjoys watching their conversations and what they do~ And if you're friends with him, he would always stick up for you and be helpful. Most of the time when he likes someone/ really wants to talk to them he acts really fidget-y and is too nervous to approach them. He often stutters when he's nervous, but, strangely, he never stutters when talking to people of high-authority (Nol, the managers, etc.), no matter how nervous he is.

◊ Bio:
THIS IS LONG. SO IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW HIS INTRICATE BACK-BACKSTORY, JUST SCROLL DOWN TO THE CAPS.
Clown was made in the late 1800's in Italy as a present for a girl named Isabelle (Clown was made by her grandfather). Her family owned a theater that often had plays or puppet shows. Isabelle was really fond of marionettes, and Clown was her favorite. Later, however, Isabelle caught scarlet fever and was kept in bed all day. Her grandfather put on puppet shows for her using Clown, and it seemed she was recovering because her fondness for the doll kept her very lively. A couple days after she got sick, Isabelle seemed healthy enough to go outside again. The first thing she wanted to do was see a puppet show in her family's theater. During the show, Clown's strings snapped due to being worn (they were made out of kinda cheap string). Isabelle collapsed at the end of the show, and later died. Her family abandoned their theater because it reminded them of their dead child, and left Clown with it.

A few years later, some kids began using the old theater as a hideout. One of the boys in the group, Michael, thought Clown would be a good present for his sister, Maria, who liked the circus. Michael and his friends and sister enjoyed playing in the rafters/beams above the stage. One day, Maria decied to take Clown with her. Unable to keep her balance with the puppet, she dropped Clown, who landed on one of the beams. The beam was old and semi-rotted, and despite of warnings and protests form his friends, Michael went to retrieve it for her. The beam snapped under his weight and he fell and died, sprawled out on center-stage, still clutching the doll. Maria was petrified at the sight of her brother and refused to beleive he died for her. Instead she blamed his death on Clown and decided to burn him. The broken puppet was found by an European woman named Elizabeth, who brought him to London and fixed him. Nee, Guess what? She died in a car crash two years later. Clown was given to her husband who sold him to a puppeteer who later died. Well. . . Uhm this goes on for a while. . . nine more people die. . . He becomes known as "The Cursed Marionette"

THIS IS THE IMPORTANT PARAGRAPJH:
In the late 1960's Clown was found in a trash dump by a young witch. She was practicing her magic, and liked how the puppet looked, so she fixed him up and broght him to life. Though he was just a hollow body (he has no soul yet), he had memories of his life from before. At first Clown was just used as a slave/golem, but the witch grew fond of him and named him "Clown" after his appearance. She also transformed him into a gijinka so he would be moar helpful XD. Clown slowly developed a soul due to the witch and his memories. When he first assesed the memories (without a soul) he thought nothing of them, but now they were just too much emotional trauma for his new soul to deal with and his sanity began to rip itself up, and he grew increasingly paranoid and depressed/suicidal. The witch realized his suffering and cast a spell that hid all his memories, including the 50 somewhat years that he spent with her, deep withing his soul so he wouldn't have to remember them. After that, Clown fell into a sort of coma where the witch enabled him to be able to freely transform between a puppet and a gijinka and also that his memories would return when his soul was strong enough to dreal with them. She left him with an old craftsman who took care of him until he grew old. He then brought Clown to Toy-Store (where the witch told him to bring Clown). He fully remembers the time he spent with the old craftsman, though he never talks about it, and it seems to be an uncomfortable subject to him (Who knows why~ mufufufu)
He recovered some of his memory, but a lot still remains unknown (like memories of Isabelle. And the witch's identity).

How he got to Toy-Store
He received intstructions from the old craftsman (whom Clown calls "Ojii-san" which means "Grandpa" in Japanese) that said how to get to the Toy-Store. Clown was to take a train into Opalstone, and at the station he met his first TS friend, a witch named Ayame (c) ~Kopiki-chan )who worked at the store. Ayame was the first person he met and befriended in a loooong time. After they rode the train to the Store, they had to separate to go to their different job groups. A girl named Crystal ( [link] (c) ~TheDreamAngel ) was assigned to his group (Soul Collector) because her manager was at a meeting. Clown was the only Soul Collector in his group, and even so, Crystal was happy to show him around.

Welll~ That's basically how he got to TS XD


◊ Likes:
Being with/watching others, English Breakfast tea, Tiramisu, the moon, the woods, traveling circuses, Candy (especially chocolate), Sweet pastries/food/pie/etc XD, being in the sun
Playing the Piano- He doesn't remember how he learned it, though (efufufufu)

◊ Dislikes:
Elaborate theaters/stages. When presented to one, he collapses onto his knees and covers his face with his hands and has strange flashbacks of blood and a young girl in black.
Creepy Circus clowns (Ahahaha XD), Being alone, spicy food

◊ Additional Information:
-He has regular-ish hands (they look kinda like skeleton hands XD), not claws. His sleeves are just really long :I
And he can open his mouth (it isn't sewed, it just looks it)
-he cant feel pain in his arms or legs or head, just his chest/ torso
-he can take off his head (it's stiched on), he just doesn't like doing it and he almost never doesss
-He actually doesn't mind being ordered around by the bears, Unless they are hurting other people
-He can't blush
-His internal structures are made of clockwork, and his "blood" is the oil in the clockwork.
-He nececarilly cry, but when he's under very strong emotion, a black oil-like liquid comes out of his eyes. But this rarely ever happens. The same thing happens when he bleeds, though bleeding can happen whenever he is cut.
-He doesn't need to eat very often, but he usually eats really sugary foods (Pastries/candy etc.) because his clockwork body runs on sugar molecules converted to energy (a lot like a normal human)
-For some reason, he knows some Japanese, yet he doesn't know why. (The reason is that the witch that he was with was half Japanese, and she taught him the basic language, but since he got his memory hidden, he doesn't know where he learned. The craftsman that he was with was Japanese, too)


THAT WAS LONGGG XD
If you read every single word, you are epic.
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Comments: 270

MikachuKuro In reply to ??? [2011-07-20 05:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Clown: A-ah~ *he looked around the room some more*

((Okies, that's fine ))

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tomboy-kun In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-07-20 05:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Ambrose: *swells with pride a bit, but doesn't show it**sits on the bed*

((Thank you~ You're so nice!))

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MikachuKuro In reply to ??? [2011-06-18 00:54:55 +0000 UTC]

GAHH!!! If one of the people that is evaluating the apps sees this, [link]
It's my friend's app!! And #The-Waiting-List didn't accept it yet so I'm posting it here just in case it doesn't get in on time!!

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FigyDaFlygon In reply to ??? [2011-06-17 16:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Hello~ I kinda felt really happy for that little inclusion of my OC in your sketch, (DRRR credit sketch thingy) and I want to repay you in some way. The only thing that came to mind was to offer some critique on your application.

However, your application looks really great as it is! The only thing that looked a little off to me was all the Japanese references. It seems awkward in the story and description and it doesn't seem to fit with the overall theme, which seems almost strictly European. I can see some ways where you could make it fit in, such as making the old craftsman that the which handed Clown to Japanese, or it went traveling somehow or other. Otherwise I think it might be best to leave it out altogether...

Another thing thing, and this one I see a bit often, I can't clearly see the connection between the end of Clown's past, personality, likes and his job. What I mean is, I can't understand why he would become a soul reaper, because as far as I know, it's quite the dreadful job. You don't have to change it or any of the key features, seeing as you already played around with it, but I think having a clear connection between Clown and the soul reaper job would be a good thing to add. Possibly the easiest thing to do to make it seem sensible is to change around his likes so that there's a bit of backstory to it. Like maybe he likes to give souls a second chance at life? Or maybe there's something special about collecting souls that makes him happy because clearly he's a happy character and he needs a happy reason to do a sad job. :]

I'd like to say once again that this is a very thorough app and it touches at everything nicely. ^u^d
And thanks for drawing Mae!

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MikachuKuro In reply to FigyDaFlygon [2011-06-17 17:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the critique!!!!!! > w <
Yes, I was thinking they may seem out of place, too. But the Japanese references are because of the Witch he spent a lot of time with (She was half European, half Japanese). Since he got his memory hidden, he doesn't know why he knows Japanese and such~ The craftsman was also Japanese.
But I can see how it can be awkaward in his bio, so maybe I should add this part? Or I could change it. . .

Oh, and I understand the part about his job and thought it might not make that much sence ^^'
Well because of his sad past, he has a bit of a "darker" sadistic side. Because of something that happened with "Ojii-san" he has a sort of. . . umm, "Not all souls deserve to live" sort of thing. . . and he takes the souls of truly evil people (Like a serial killer, or something like that XD)
He also has a strong sypathy for people that had an died unexpectadly or early, and takes their souls to be re-animated as living dolls.

And no problem

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FigyDaFlygon In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-17 18:11:36 +0000 UTC]

That's great! So just add in what you just told me and I think you'll have the perfect app!

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MikachuKuro In reply to FigyDaFlygon [2011-06-17 18:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanks so much~!

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lemon-drop-soda In reply to ??? [2011-06-15 01:33:42 +0000 UTC]

FBIJALNF;RARJAKRE;AG;U;JFKALFJIRAAAAAAAAAA HE'S SO CUTE!!!!!
I really hope he get's in with my Annaliese. OH THE POSSIBILITIES!!! =^.^=

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MikachuKuro In reply to lemon-drop-soda [2011-06-15 01:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha Thank you XD
And same here
Maybe we could rp some time :'D

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MikachuKuro In reply to ??? [2011-06-09 06:10:32 +0000 UTC]

K;LjDFK;AJJDFA;KFDAFSDLFD SOMEONE RP WITH MEH IS TEH COMMENTS!! ; 3 ;

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remnant-imaginations In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-11 00:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Ghoulette: "you,hey you, you fail." >:U
"Cursin all your owners like that."
*five seconds later*
"no Im joking dude" XD

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MikachuKuro In reply to remnant-imaginations [2011-06-11 00:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Clown: E-ehh TT A TT. . . . Oh, O-okay :/

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serenityadoptables In reply to ??? [2011-06-09 01:37:31 +0000 UTC]

cool char.
i tried to apply to toy store before XD but it didnt work out
you'll probably get in :U

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MikachuKuro In reply to serenityadoptables [2011-06-09 05:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~!

And I hope you get in this time around!

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Kopiki-chan In reply to ??? [2011-06-09 00:48:56 +0000 UTC]

so cute! and he sorta reminds me of kurona~

oh and i'm going to message you a question about this~

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MikachuKuro In reply to Kopiki-chan [2011-06-09 05:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Yush~

And okies *checks messages*

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KaidoAdoptions In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 23:40:18 +0000 UTC]

oooo another marionette

hes so cute >w<

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MikachuKuro In reply to KaidoAdoptions [2011-06-08 00:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Yush~

And dsfkas;flafsjfd;aklsk Thank youuu!!!

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KaidoAdoptions In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 23:49:45 +0000 UTC]

hee hee~

udcnialu your welcome!!!!

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EVALIOSSUSS In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 21:49:10 +0000 UTC]

I like him ^^

His bio wasn't that long but it was easy to get lost cause it's two huge paragraphs so maybe if ya space them out a bit moar~

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MikachuKuro In reply to EVALIOSSUSS [2011-06-08 00:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~!

And good idea! Imma do that. . .

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EVALIOSSUSS In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 14:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes

^^

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Little-Imp-Rin In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 21:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Yesh!! Another marionette--Giselle should be so happy!! They shall rule ze VORLD!!! Ahahaha!! (not really) XD

But still, cute design and nice bio!

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MikachuKuro In reply to Little-Imp-Rin [2011-06-08 00:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha~! They should RP together >:U

And thank you! It took me SO LONG to write that XD

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Little-Imp-Rin In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

They should!! Totally! Marionettes need to stick together! * A *

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MikachuKuro In reply to Little-Imp-Rin [2011-06-08 00:54:36 +0000 UTC]

YEAHHHHHHHHHHH. . hhh XD

*wants to RP now but is too scared XD*

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Little-Imp-Rin In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 02:15:14 +0000 UTC]

I am too...the toy store chat room is intimidating....O x O

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xfrozenviolet In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 20:37:03 +0000 UTC]

.... //takes him and hides in a box

So cuuuute~! He's adorablee!

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MikachuKuro In reply to xfrozenviolet [2011-06-08 00:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Thank you!

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xfrozenviolet In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 03:50:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Hope you get in the next time around! [:

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Ab-anna In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 11:20:17 +0000 UTC]

Adorable in a creepy way...
But i like him!

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confuzzled-Desu-Noto In reply to ??? [2011-06-07 07:36:56 +0000 UTC]

HE'S ADORABLE. JSDFHKASJHFKA

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MikachuKuro In reply to confuzzled-Desu-Noto [2011-06-07 08:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank youu~!!!!

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confuzzled-Desu-Noto In reply to MikachuKuro [2011-06-08 02:15:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~!

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