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Tried a colored page. Should be a pretty recognizable scene
Song of the Lioness (c) Tamora Pierce
Art (c) Minuiko
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This is fantastic.
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Yes, yes, Alanna's face is adorable! I love her expression.
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I love this
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Though critique wise, his arm looks a bit broken in the bottom panel.
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GEORGE! Handsome and yet perfect to the character as a normal looking man, not like Jon's "most handsome man Alanna ever saw" status. xD
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I've always imagined George differently... however, I still adore this!
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Loooove this scene! 
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i love how you drew the candle, nice perspective!
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this scene is one of my favorites in the book. i love how you drew alanna the best, though!
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You illustrated that scene really well
I love how you did that. It's awesome! <3
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Omigod this scene is amazing - one of my favorite George/Alanna scenes in the first book (aside from the first meeting, pony buying, and of course the part where she makes the big reveal to him)!!! <333
Love the lighting in this, though perspective looks a bit off in the bottom panel...Otherwise, overall composition and panels is great!
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Ahh I love this scene xD And the bit just before it! And the whole book. And the whole series. And alllll of Tamora Pierce's work XD
Ahem I digress. Nice work
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her legs and her butt look too small in the first panel, but I am also terrible at drawing people younger than 16... they're both so cute!
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Your young George is perfect.
His fist is at a broken-looking angle in the bottom panel, though; it's the articulation of his elbow and wrist that give that impression. The angle of his pelvis and legs makes it look like he's either crouching, Tae Bo style, or kneeling, which I'm not sure was your intention. Maybe play with the viewing angle in that last panel?
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I love these two and I like what you did with the coloring.
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KYAAAAAA~~~!!!!
This sooo makes me wanna re-read the books!
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