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Description "FAITH - An AGMP Story" - a Doujinshi/Comic by =MiyaToriaka
Translator German into English: ~MoD366 (Thank you very much ♥)
Beta-Reader: *Da-Wabbit (Thank you very much, too ♥)
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MAY AND THE OTHERS DIDN'T HEAR MISTY SPEAKING. EVERYONE WHO KNOW MISTY [DELIA, MAY AND MAX] KNEW FROM THE VERY BEGINNING WHO "KASU" WAS. Explanation: In Chapter 4 you could see a panel where Gary and May cared for "Kasu" when she was almost dying because of Arbok's poison. There, Gary talked with May about his thoughts about "Kasu" for being "Misty" in truth. So he told her all the facts he also yelled at Misty when he found out she really was "Kasu". I hope you can follow my bad English explanation OTL.
THE REST WHY AND HOW WON'T BE SPOILERED. IT WILL BECOME EXPLAINED IN THE COMIC ITSELF. So please, be patient.


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Comments: 501

MiyaToriaka In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 20:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Yep - 22 more pages to go.

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iKeptOnSmiling In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 06:20:05 +0000 UTC]

oh dear. good luck!

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Pwndu232 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:53:43 +0000 UTC]

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Pwndu232 [2011-10-28 05:36:34 +0000 UTC]

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Lord-Lavrahtheen In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:53:30 +0000 UTC]

wow...thy cought on really fast
This page seems a bit rushed if you ask me. My guess is that if there was at least one or two pages where they'd exchange opinions on how simmilar Kasu and Misty look it would... have a better feel... I mean they instantly assumed that it has to be Misty without asking how is it possible for her to be a Pikachu (afterall, neither May nor Drew, Dawn, Max or Deliah witnessed the events from the episode where Ash got turned)

believe me, I don't wish o sound too critical or negative... but the pacing here is a bit to "fast forward"...

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Lord-Lavrahtheen [2011-10-27 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]

Please have a look on the artist's comment. I tried to explain it there
But in the following chapters will come some more surprises. So please, be patient.

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Lord-Lavrahtheen In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 04:09:44 +0000 UTC]

hmm, guess that can be somewhat treated as an explanation

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Lord-Lavrahtheen [2011-10-28 05:00:15 +0000 UTC]

It seems to me you dislike the comic since for a whilt, don't you?

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Lord-Lavrahtheen In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 15:09:21 +0000 UTC]

that's not actually the case
the whole story in general I like, your Art style is what I always admired... just this page... this onpage felt a bit "odd"... rushed ... like it's racing to the end
Nothing more, nothing less

I'm still anticipating the conclusion of this story. I know that you'll give it a happy ending, but how precisely will it look is what draws my curiosity

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Lord-Lavrahtheen [2011-11-02 06:07:49 +0000 UTC]

And I only can plea you to wait. Maybe it seems so but it's not.

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Lord-Lavrahtheen In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-11-02 17:01:38 +0000 UTC]

ok, I see

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WingMcCallister In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:53:24 +0000 UTC]

MORE!

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MiyaToriaka In reply to WingMcCallister [2011-10-28 05:36:30 +0000 UTC]

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WingMcCallister In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 05:50:07 +0000 UTC]

lol It can be my birthday wish.

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LooneyTunerIan In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:52:14 +0000 UTC]

And so ends Chapter 5.

Get ready for the chapter 6, the semi-final chapter!

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MiyaToriaka In reply to LooneyTunerIan [2011-10-27 20:55:37 +0000 UTC]

No, it doesn't end. It's only the half of the chapter.

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LooneyTunerIan In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-27 21:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Sometimes I usually think that big panels usually meant the end of chapters.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to LooneyTunerIan [2011-10-28 04:56:42 +0000 UTC]

As long as there stands no "End of Chapter x" it isn't finished.

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LooneyTunerIan In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 05:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Good point.

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werfamily16 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see the next page. You kind of make it sound like May had something to do with the transformation. Like she knew something else as well.
Delia: That Pikachu.... wasn't that?
May: Yes it was.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to werfamily16 [2011-10-27 20:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Nya, not really
Please have a look on the artist's comment. I tried to explain it there

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chili19 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Wait...how did May know...?

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MiyaToriaka In reply to chili19 [2011-10-27 20:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Please have a look on the artist's comment. I tried to explain it there

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lilmarisa In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:49:56 +0000 UTC]

What the hell, May?! You knew this whole time and didn't say anything? xD

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MiyaToriaka In reply to lilmarisa [2011-10-27 20:54:31 +0000 UTC]

She wasn't sure - same as Gary

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42Dannybob In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:48:44 +0000 UTC]

detective Delia and May

now we just need Ash to find out

Can't wait to see the next page
Great Job

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MiyaToriaka In reply to 42Dannybob [2011-10-28 05:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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dorangonyoukaikasumi In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Blitzmerker! XD

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MiyaToriaka In reply to dorangonyoukaikasumi [2011-10-28 05:36:15 +0000 UTC]

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GoldGecko In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Wait? That was Misty?

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MiyaToriaka In reply to GoldGecko [2011-10-27 20:54:13 +0000 UTC]

OTL

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GoldGecko In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 10:44:29 +0000 UTC]

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Stormrider19 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-27 21:49:48 +0000 UTC]

I guess ash isn't the only oblivious one

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Stormrider19 [2011-10-28 04:56:56 +0000 UTC]

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victorofhell99 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:47:06 +0000 UTC]

tan tan tan drama

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MiyaToriaka In reply to victorofhell99 [2011-10-28 05:36:11 +0000 UTC]

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victorofhell99 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-28 05:53:57 +0000 UTC]

tan tan tannnnnnnnnnnnnn future cliff hanger

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mimlev714 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Geez, Ash!!! Everybody knows but you!!! Come on, use your brain as if you were battling...OPEN IT!!!

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MiyaToriaka In reply to mimlev714 [2011-10-28 05:36:08 +0000 UTC]

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PonchoFirewalker01 In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Whoah, they actually heard them then!

Oh and . . . . .

FIRST!

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DonovanMcEwen In reply to PonchoFirewalker01 [2011-10-27 19:41:39 +0000 UTC]

second actually

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PonchoFirewalker01 In reply to DonovanMcEwen [2011-10-27 22:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, didn't see that first one when I was typing.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to PonchoFirewalker01 [2011-10-27 18:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Please have a look in my artist's comment

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PonchoFirewalker01 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-27 19:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh, my bad

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MiyaToriaka In reply to PonchoFirewalker01 [2011-10-27 20:53:55 +0000 UTC]

It's not your fault I edited it. Also I edited something else a few seconds before.

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PonchoFirewalker01 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-27 22:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay

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MiyaToriaka In reply to PonchoFirewalker01 [2011-10-28 04:57:36 +0000 UTC]

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DestinyDecade In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 18:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Looks like everything is starting to make perfect sense.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to DestinyDecade [2011-10-27 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

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DestinyDecade In reply to MiyaToriaka [2011-10-27 21:09:52 +0000 UTC]

^^

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