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Published: 2010-01-10 18:24:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 34651; Favourites: 989; Downloads: 360
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Description In A Cold Winternight

So, this is the picture for ~sunshineikimaru 's contest

Story:
Ash, Misty and their Pokémon found a cave where they could protect themselves of a blizzard.
Ash saw Misty is cold. So he gave her his jacket she can sleep for a while. Misty was a lil bit surprised but said "Thank you, Ash..." and tried to sleep a little bit.
But when she realized Ash was shivering she got the idea she had a corner in her bag. She grapped it and put it over Ash and her, so they could sleep warmly. But for both this situation was new and a little bit embarassing. So they had to blush.

Charizard looks a little bit small but that's because he lies behind Ash and Misty. Sorry for this perpsective-mistake.

Hope, you like it

Yours
Miya
♥♥♥

Ash/Satoshi/Sacha, Misty/Kasumi/Ondine, Pikachu, Togepi and Charizard/Glurak belong to (c) Satoshi Tajiri, Pokémon Nintedo, Game Freak
FanArt belongs to (c) *MiyaToriaka
Contest: Ash-and-Misty-Winter-Contest by ~sunshineikimaru
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Comments: 384

soulterror101 In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 14:35:30 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^_^

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Ratet In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 03:59:47 +0000 UTC]

That is so cute! I love the expressions.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Ratet [2010-01-11 06:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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HeartinaRosebud In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 03:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's cute

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MiyaToriaka In reply to HeartinaRosebud [2010-01-11 06:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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HeartinaRosebud In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 11:39:17 +0000 UTC]

No worries.

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MistysCharizard In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 03:46:13 +0000 UTC]

i think the Charizard look great. the main focus is Ash & Misty. so the perspective & proportion is good.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to MistysCharizard [2010-01-11 12:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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MistysCharizard In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 03:42:22 +0000 UTC]

i think charizard looks good. plus the main focus is Ash & Misty. so the perspective & proportion are good.
i wish i could draw as good as u. ^_^

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MiyaToriaka In reply to MistysCharizard [2010-01-11 06:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Artemis-Fowl-Geek In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 03:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Very, very cute =3

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Artemis-Fowl-Geek [2010-01-11 06:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SuperMario123 In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 02:45:38 +0000 UTC]

aw theyre so cuteeee! great job

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MiyaToriaka In reply to SuperMario123 [2010-01-11 06:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SuperMario123 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-13 02:36:55 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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SpiritedElegance In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 02:04:03 +0000 UTC]

what did you use to colour this picture it kind of looks like pencil crayon .... but im ot sure >.< its beautiful btw i love it :3

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MiyaToriaka In reply to SpiritedElegance [2010-01-11 06:09:42 +0000 UTC]

I did it with LYRA pencil colors

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SpiritedElegance In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 23:18:42 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhh thank you XD it was bothering me XD

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MiyaToriaka In reply to SpiritedElegance [2010-01-12 12:24:35 +0000 UTC]

bothering? Why? O_O

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SpiritedElegance In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-12 23:27:21 +0000 UTC]

well you see i wasnt sure of what you used to colour so it was bothering me not kowing what it was XD the colours i thought where to bright to be coloured penciles but aperently not ^^

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MiyaToriaka In reply to SpiritedElegance [2010-01-13 06:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Ou I see .__.

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Darigaaz-the-Igniter In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 01:22:43 +0000 UTC]

What's the scouter say about the awkwardness level?

It's over 9000!

Sorry, but thet really do look more awkward than cuddly.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Darigaaz-the-Igniter [2010-01-11 06:09:24 +0000 UTC]

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karkar2000 In reply to ??? [2010-01-11 01:10:05 +0000 UTC]

i love it!!!wow charizard looks so real its awsome!!!
good luck in the contest

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MiyaToriaka In reply to karkar2000 [2010-01-11 06:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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karkar2000 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 11:28:59 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!

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iTiffanyBlue In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 23:51:12 +0000 UTC]

This is seriously very beautiful! The lighting is just so perfect and Ash and Misty look so cute

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MiyaToriaka In reply to iTiffanyBlue [2010-01-11 06:08:51 +0000 UTC]

AWW thank you so much

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kingofthedededes73 In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 23:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Gulrak. that's an unusual name for charizard, is it Japanese or something.

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MiyaToriaka In reply to kingofthedededes73 [2010-01-11 06:08:36 +0000 UTC]

It's Glurak XDXD That's the German name.

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kingofthedededes73 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 20:35:48 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Mirai-Mika In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 23:11:47 +0000 UTC]

I love it! As soon as I saw it I said Awwwww out loud =3! So cuutteee

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MiyaToriaka In reply to Mirai-Mika [2010-01-11 06:08:21 +0000 UTC]

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MistythePikachu In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 23:06:58 +0000 UTC]

aww ash and misty are so cute

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MiyaToriaka In reply to MistythePikachu [2010-01-11 06:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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anjolendario In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 22:55:44 +0000 UTC]

woahhh kawaiiii!! *---*

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MiyaToriaka In reply to anjolendario [2010-01-11 06:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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anjolendario In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-13 20:14:25 +0000 UTC]

^^

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mysticalmists In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 22:43:42 +0000 UTC]

It's so cute! Great job, especially as you've been unwell lately

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MiyaToriaka In reply to mysticalmists [2010-01-11 06:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot
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ClannadMan In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 22:04:37 +0000 UTC]

The shading and little touches are always what make these stand out. The closed Togepi egg, the flame from Charizard's nostrils, the stalagmites coming up from the ground, melting snow at the cave's edge; great additions that make the illustration come alive! The additional blush from Charizard's flame on the cheaks of Ash and Misty maked the onlooker wonder: are they blushing at each other, from the cold, from the heat, or perhaps all three?

(As a side note: Misty is traveling in that outfit with it that cold outside? Is she insane?!? )

Hmm. Well, I've written enough, so I might as well make this into a full fledged critique, no? Yes, I may not be a great artist myself, but I have a good eye for well done work. Oh well, here's what I've got...

Vision - Your illustrations have always had good vision; if they didn't, the additional details of the picture would not show up. Easy 5 Star rating here.

Originality - Has this scene been done before? Yes... but does that not make it any less interesting? Of course not, especially with the details added in. The distracted/confused expressions of Ash and Misty are certainly different than what the cave scene usually provides. This deserves a 4 - 4.5 star rating; it does not blow one away with its originality, but it does have a positive uniqueness to it!

Technique - Nearly flawless! Fireside shading a great new touch that I have not seen from you before. The POKEs may be a bit small, but as you said, they are in the background, right? 4.5 - 5 Stars here.

Impact - Does this pic do what it is supposed to? Are the emotional responses by the characters conveyed correctly? Yes, and Yes. The only slightly confusing part is why Misty looks angry while she is apparently singing. o.0 If I were to guess I would say that she is potentially imbarassed (?) and is whistling to ease the atmosphere of the situation. If so, well done, I got it! I would say that this is worthy of 5 Stars as well.

Overall, the piece is great. The dual light sources provide a different type of shading I have not seen in your other works. I hope that you will use this new found style again, since you're able to pull it off so well!

As always, keep up the great work!

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MiyaToriaka In reply to ClannadMan [2010-01-10 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]

AWW thank you so much for this critique ;__; It helps me a lot!
I'm so happy you like it in whole
Yeah, Misty is whistling She only wants to overplay the situation to calm herself down XD She has such a big heartbeat

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PanMarlon In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 21:56:15 +0000 UTC]

that charizard is a legal midget and proud of it

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MiyaToriaka In reply to PanMarlon [2010-01-10 22:26:25 +0000 UTC]

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BlackRose94 In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 21:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Ich finds süüüß ^////^
Und so typisch XDXD

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MiyaToriaka In reply to BlackRose94 [2010-01-10 21:54:29 +0000 UTC]

AWW danke dir

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BlackRose94 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 17:45:52 +0000 UTC]

kein Ding ^^

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sahyr90 In reply to ??? [2010-01-10 21:18:01 +0000 UTC]

aww poor misty needs some love

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MiyaToriaka In reply to sahyr90 [2010-01-10 21:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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sahyr90 In reply to MiyaToriaka [2010-01-11 01:20:48 +0000 UTC]

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