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Published: 2010-10-23 22:26:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 4695; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 5
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I guess this pic is kinda a spoiler for Bluestars Prophcey
Goosefeathers said he saw them there
Enjoy ^w^
Bluestar/Bluefur, Oakheart, Goosefeathers(c)Erin Hunter/Warriors
please tell me how I could improve
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Yes, o master jedi ^w^(YUSH!!! I love star wars 
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O YESH!!!Other one!!
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I love Goosefeather's design! Great job!
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ITS AWSOME! i just think you focused to much on goosefeather, so maybe put a little more effort into oakferat and bluefur's pelts? BUT ITS STILL GREAT!
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I think I did too, and thanks
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this is great! in my opinion, u dont needs improve its great! i esspessially the way u did goosefeather's fur and Oak and Blue look so cute
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XD
So truuueee~
Sorta creepy, though.
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I soo agree, very creepy
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Lol!
Very nice<3
But you should move the root thats under them, it looks a bit.. weird XD
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Thanks ^w^
I should... yea it does look weirdish
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this is so aborable! hmm a way you could improve?? i think i would remove the root under them and give them shadows. it looks like theyre floating ^-^
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Never thought of that thank you ^w^
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no offence to your amazing picture though~~ :L
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Hmm... The thing I see, is that where Bluefur and Oakheart are laying, there is a large root under them, and they don't even seem bothered by it. Maybe you could have removed the root and made it look like they were sleeping in between the nook of the tree c: Also, if the tree has leaves on it, make the shadow cover abit more of the area, and cover up Bluefur and Oakheart. Make sure you add alittle brightness where the leaves aren't together, like where the moonlight is shining through.
Also, Make the grass go up alittle bit further, or add some trees or mountains in the background, since the highstones *I think thats what their called, I haven't read it in forever* aren't that far away from the Gathering area. c:
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Thanks you, I will try to improve and try some too....
(thanks for telling me ^w^)
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c: No problem~ <3
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Wow, love Goosefeather in this XD
Ways you could improve? You're already pretty good, but the only thing I really notice is that Bluefur and Oakheart don't have shadows, well it looks like there's a shadow, but it looks like the tree's shadow.
Love this, gotta fav it now!!!
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thanks ^w^
I never notice that
and thank you again
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lol i love his face and to improve...maybe you could make the grass a bit yellowish? not sure. and maybe a moon? lol i suck at telling people to improve when they are way better then me
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yea, but I was being lazy soo it not yellow
I thought about a moon, but it made it look kinda busy
awww, I think you did a wonderful job, I suck at it too, because don't what to hurt there feelings, and things like that
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