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Mel:
Since Death Of All Grinches has already been reviewed by a few people, I can't give you a full review of it but rather i'll talk about why I think the fic in general is awful. For one thing...this was a trollfic made to try and be a supposed sequel to a TftW episode involving a grinch-like monster hence why there are grinches in this story, second...this was made to directly attack Nathan, thirdly...self-insert..nuff said. And the self insert character that is in this story is obviously a Daloli-verse character that is a former DA-Verse villain, especially since I remember this particular character posing in the form a little girl despite being a teenager or possibly older. The actual version of this character is specifically a demonic sorceress or just a deranged demoness who can turn into a little girl to fool her victims before she sucks the life out of them. She comes across as an asshole in this for numerous reasons, for one thing she really seems to loathe the grinch species for no particular reason. Also...ugh, the pedophile accusations were directed at Nathan at the time. Also...ick, this fic was written in 2010/2011 and there's a pedo bear reference. NOBODY on the internet these days references pedo bear or even makes references to memes like that stupid learn2 (insert action word here) meme in these day and age. This is just as embarrassing and anachronistic as saying that most artists these days use MSPaint (this was an accusation made by Daloli-verse citizens towards anti-Nathan despite the fact this storyarc took place in 2011-2014 and I doubt by that time Paint was even still a thing). Seriously..who references MSPaint in this day and age and who the hell still uses that?

Outdated meme references are a major problem with me, I can't stand it when people in the Daloli-verse think they're hip and try to prove it by making references to those memes. Pedo bear, make me a sammich (which is a sexist meme by the way), and the facepalm meme, it just proves they're out of touch. Pedo bear and facepalm and all those 4-chan memes originated in 2003. Say what you want about me referencing movies and songs from the 80's and 90's but at least I don't reference memes that aren't even popular anymore. By the way, make me a sammich is a phase that originated in an SNL skit. Also we're supposed to root for this character but she is conspiring to destroy the titular grinch-like monster and talking about him behind his back, not to mention the fact she's a demon posing as a little girl so it doesn't even count as a supposedly 'pedophilic' relationship.

She's not even a real little girl, she is likely an ancient sorceress or a bratty teenager with demon powers who chooses to turn into a little girl in order to pretend to be innocent. She's hardly innocent at all, especially once she carries out her plan and pretty much commits a Kim Jun Un and nukes the damn place. Oh and if she couldn't get any worse, she apparently got turned into a grinch-like form in the story prior to this one and her way of getting turned back is....killing the grinch-like monster and eating his heart? Eeeew, so she not only committed genocide but she's also a freaking cannibal. I'm sorry but grinches are humanoid creatures and she is humanoid-ish herself, that's practically cannibalism. Yes, cannibalism and genocide in a story that is supposedly a sequel to a story that is based on or inspired by a children's story. Because when I think 'How The Grinch Stole Christmas'...I think of a cannibalistic she-demon who goes around with genocidal tendencies.

Also....it's clear that the author's actual work sucks and they think that they are better than everyone else, in fact they disabled comments for no reason apart from they think they're above criticism, well people like that aren't above criticism....they're just crybabies that think they are right but they're actually completely wrong. This story was in fact quoted on the Torch The Franchise and Run page on TVTropes, and it's even on the creepypasta troll training wiki page, it used to be on the troll-pasta wiki.

Description
Mel:
Since Death Of All Grinches has already been reviewed by a few people, I can't give you a full review of it but rather i'll talk about why I think the fic in general is awful. For one thing...this was a trollfic made to try and be a supposed sequel to a TftW episode involving a grinch-like monster hence why there are grinches in this story, second...this was made to directly attack Nathan, thirdly...self-insert..nuff said. And the self insert character that is in this story is obviously a Daloli-verse character that is a former DA-Verse villain, especially since I remember this particular character posing in the form a little girl despite being a teenager or possibly older. The actual version of this character is specifically a demonic sorceress or just a deranged demoness who can turn into a little girl to fool her victims before she sucks the life out of them. She comes across as an asshole in this for numerous reasons, for one thing she really seems to loathe the grinch species for no particular reason. Also...ugh, the pedophile accusations were directed at Nathan at the time. Also...ick, this fic was written in 2010/2011 and there's a pedo bear reference. NOBODY on the internet these days references pedo bear or even makes references to memes like that stupid learn2 (insert action word here) meme in these day and age. This is just as embarrassing and anachronistic as saying that most artists these days use MSPaint (this was an accusation made by Daloli-verse citizens towards anti-Nathan despite the fact this storyarc took place in 2011-2014 and I doubt by that time Paint was even still a thing). Seriously..who references MSPaint in this day and age and who the hell still uses that?

Outdated meme references are a major problem with me, I can't stand it when people in the Daloli-verse think they're hip and try to prove it by making references to those memes. Pedo bear, make me a sammich (which is a sexist meme by the way), and the facepalm meme, it just proves they're out of touch. Pedo bear and facepalm and all those 4-chan memes originated in 2003. Say what you want about me referencing movies and songs from the 80's and 90's but at least I don't reference memes that aren't even popular anymore. By the way, make me a sammich is a phase that originated in an SNL skit. Also we're supposed to root for this character but she is conspiring to destroy the titular grinch-like monster and talking about him behind his back, not to mention the fact she's a demon posing as a little girl so it doesn't even count as a supposedly 'pedophilic' relationship.

She's not even a real little girl, she is likely an ancient sorceress or a bratty teenager with demon powers who chooses to turn into a little girl in order to pretend to be innocent. She's hardly innocent at all, especially once she carries out her plan and pretty much commits a Kim Jun Un and nukes the damn place. Oh and if she couldn't get any worse, she apparently got turned into a grinch-like form in the story prior to this one and her way of getting turned back is....killing the grinch-like monster and eating his heart? Eeeew, so she not only committed genocide but she's also a freaking cannibal. I'm sorry but grinches are humanoid creatures and she is humanoid-ish herself, that's practically cannibalism. Yes, cannibalism and genocide in a story that is supposedly a sequel to a story that is based on or inspired by a children's story. Because when I think 'How The Grinch Stole Christmas'...I think of a cannibalistic she-demon who goes around with genocidal tendencies.

Also....it's clear that the author's actual work sucks and they think that they are better than everyone else, in fact they disabled comments for no reason apart from they think they're above criticism, well people like that aren't above criticism....they're just crybabies that think they are right but they're actually completely wrong. This story was in fact quoted on the Torch The Franchise and Run page on TVTropes, and it's even on the creepypasta troll training wiki page, it used to be on the troll-pasta wiki.