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moonjava — Becoming the Trees
Published: 2004-05-16 16:57:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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dreaded hair in wavymist, panchromatic irises
bound dreams, dewy
henna Earth-toned love
rolling in the grass, acid
guitar, through the soul
who'd have thought things'd
turn this way? (well they didn't)
When we become the
trees. Redwood breath in the early morning
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okay first, what are line breaks? and don't read words connecting necessarily, some fit together weirdly xdragonmasterdude. but yeahhh generally my stuff is weird haha
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yeah, very confusing, hard to understand the message
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very... TS Elliot. Only different.
I personally would've put line breaks instead of commas in this. I wonder why you choose otherwise....
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