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Cover Page: TINGE: The Commoner - Cover
Story and Illustration by MoonMute
Sai Paint Tool
Photoshop (Text)
Wacom Bamboo
[Constructive feedback and criticism are always welcome]
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Summary: This is story about a peasant farmer girl and how her life was changed by one young knight.
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Comments: 29
this is a very nice idea! it inspires!
I am still at the start of your story but I´m excited to read till your recent page (I´ve seen you have about over 100 pages already 
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Hehe~ Glad that you are interested in this little comic
And yep... It reached 100 pages not long ago = v = (Took way longer than what I expected... haha...)
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oh yes I am.
I can fully understand that kind of pain.
How long I struggle to just make one page of my Comic ugh...
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Haha... Got to respect those manga artist that can pump out new chapters every weeks >_<
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The cover design is definitely very attractive! The colors are bright and the composition simple but conveys the message well. The subtitle “The Commoner” is interesting and immediately, the plot of a simple commoner embarking on a journey to be the strong main protagonist comes to mind. I thought the font didn’t really match with that of “Tinge” though.
The title “Tinge” makes me frown a little because I don’t know what to expect and in a way, that’s good! I’m just not sure how it comes into the story but I guess you’ll reveal that slowly.
The sky background and the blobs of blue magic-like things are really cool~ Makes me think some kind of magic is involved. The blue spots at the bottom were a little jolting because I thought they would be blood spots but maybe they’re magic spots?
The shading on the sword is great and I can imagine an actual real sword plunged into the ground. The fork(?) on the other hand seems a little 2D in my opinion (but my forte isn’t in art). Maybe it’s the lack of depth on its right side? Interesting choice of weapon though! I’m guessing it’s the commoner’s choice of weapon?
All in all, it’s an interesting cover that conveys magic and fantasy! XD
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Hello there, Windy
Glad you find this design attractive
I must admit I am in total rush with the font here... Decided to use this out of ink printer font is due to the main character here was inspired by printer ink cartridge... But I can't really say it would match with this story arc though... (Hope it would make more sense, as story progress...)
Name of the story is also something I struggled a lot >_< (Part of the reason why I didn't start this comic sooner than this)
Ah yep~ That blue blob is definitely something magical. Though early story may not show any magic, it does exist in this world 
Huhu~ It's a pitchfork
Many thanks for taking your time to comment on this once again
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Oh I liked the font for the word "Tinge" but not the font for the subtext "The Commoner". XD
Printer ink huh, that's really interesting!
Ah ink splatter~ cool! Hmm maybe add a little shade of dark blue to that then. That would definitely be great.
Your shading skills on the sword was really good though!
Good luck on the webcomic! It certainly looks cool~
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Oh~ I see... Do you have any suggestion on what kind of font would be good for that?
Hmm... Yep... add in darker shade of blue would looks nice as well
Haha~ Thank you
Yay~
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Hmm something a little closer to the font for "Tinge". The current font makes the letters very round, like the "o" and "C". Maybe something that preserves the printer-like type but simpler.
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Hmm... I see
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Well... It's kinda is a fork. Huhu
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This is such a cool cover~ ah, I'm so excited for your new series
I like the balance between the two objects, as well as the detail on the sword! The way the sky/field fades out is a nice touch
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Thank you Nexi
Glad you like the sword and background of the cover page here
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This looks awesome! I how you drew like the sword So shiny.. It must be so sharp too he he he
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Thank you, Andrea
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Oooohhh... great prologue, very nicely done! I'm interested in where this is going
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Thank you, Signe
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Thank you for your kind words, Ocean
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That fork near the sword makes the situation look both funny and serious.
Serious, because such a fork must belong to someone giant. Someone hard to deal with.
Funny, because such an everyday tool like fork is compared to such a legendary romantic weapon as sword.
Whatever is going to happen in this story, I'm sure it will surprise many of us.
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Well~ There are saying that army marches on its stomach... Cynthia is farmer at her core, so farming tool is more important for her
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Your pages are good. I like that about the drop of water.
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Thank you Jenny
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