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mr-e — Alone Again
Published: 2001-10-30 22:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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RestrainedHeld back by a force I cant control
Confined to my prison of lonliness
Kept from my own thoughts
Made to think things I dont believe
Stopped from all I know
Told how to act
Told how to think
Told how to talk
Told how to do everything
Surpressed
Held down
But inside I feel the anger welling up
The madness screaming to be free
The fire inside wanted to be released
I feel power surging through my body
I feel the strength pushing it's way through my veins
I break my chains of imprisonment
I find my way to the outside world
But to my dismay
The world is a letdown
Anger and hatred fill the air
Violence and sadness are commonplace
This world almost makes being alone a good thing........
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Comments: 4
Well written! Very insightful and on the mark. Nice flow!
"This world almost makes being alone a good thing........ "
Oh so true!
Faithwalker
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This has a lot of strength in it. I especially like the part where the chains are broken. Gets a bit soft towards the end though.
Dreamz == Reality
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once you break your chains of imprisonment and find out whats on the outside, sometimes you want to go back. ignorance is bliss....
good poem
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Wonderful work! I really understand what your saying, I feel that shit all the time. The world really sucks at times, quite often for me. Wonderfully written, although, I dunno its just my opinion, but I felt the end could have been said somehow else, expressed better to make it a more powerful climax to a great poem. Great work though.
You're going on my deviantwatch
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