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Published: 2016-05-06 19:27:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Comic 354: Not a ChancePanel 1: Show the living room as seen from the outside, everyone talking.
Panel 2: Show Nick and Carl in the clearing in front of the Manor, near the woods. Nick in foreground panting heavily, Carl in background. Should see their breaths, but barely Carl's at all.
Narr: "Hours later..."
Nick: "Sheesh..."
SFX: Heavy breathing.
Nick 2: "I think... I should take a break."
Panel 3: Carl with arms crossed.
Carl: "You need to push yourself if you ever want to get any results."
Panel 4: Nick holding his knees, still panting.
Nick: "Not sure..."
SFX: Heavy Breathing.
Nick: "I really care anymore."
Panel 5: Carl pushing up his sunglasses.
Carl: "You don't have the best of reasons, but you at least have a goal."
Nick: "I guess..."
Nick 2: "You think if I shape up, she and I...?"
