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Comic 384: Incorrect Coordinates
Panel 1: Emmett looking at the sparking and smoking control panel. Seen from behind his left shoulder. His head and left side of the body should be visible, but not the rest.

Emmett: "-before..."
Emmett: "Aw, crap...."
SFX: "Vreeem!"

Panel 2: Tony and Nick almost completely disassembled. Should look like they are in pain. The chamber should have a mild electrical charge running in and around it. Emmett is next to the chamber about to punch an emergency override box (glass and all) in front of it with his bare fist.

Tony and Nick: Empty word balloon.
SFX: "Vreeeuuuunnnnnnnnnnn!"
Emmett: "Hang on guys! I-"

Panel 3: Massive glow of the teleporter. Show that Emmett is being thrown backwards and the glass is being thrown everywhere. Emmett's hands are outstretched to protect his face from the blast. Tony and Nick are nowhere to be seen in the beam.

SFX: Explosion noise.
SFX: "VRAAAAAANNGGGHHHHH!"

Panel 4: Beam shooting off in the air, seen from outside the Manor, reaching out of the panel vertically. Some fragments from off the roof are seen flying off into the air and arcing away from the beam.

SFX: "VRANGH!" (covering most of the page, but mostly transparent)
Eve (inside Manor, so the reader only knows it's her by what she says): "EMMETT! WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT EXPLOSIVE MATERIALS IN THE MANOR?!"
Zach: Whimpering
Lydia: "Zach, what's wrong?!"

Panel 5: Show a vapor trail coming up off the ground from where Nick and Tony were teleported from. The flat spot they were on should have been blown open and some of the circuitry should be visible. Clearly display both teleporter "chambers" to show that Nick and Tony weren't teleported into the other chamber. A bit of ceiling/roof should have fallen into the chamber that they were in. Emmett should be on his back trying to get up, with his arms behind him. He should have his hands bleeding as well as a few other spots, and be looking at the teleporter chamber. Looking from behind and below Emmett slightly upward at the chambers and the hole in the ceiling, which is curved upwards. Some glass shards should be all over the room, including some embedded in the walls, computer hardware and floor. In the left side of the foreground the reader should be able to see the cord burning that had been split upon.

Emmett: "No..."
Emmett 2: "What have I done?"

Description
Comic 384: Incorrect Coordinates
Panel 1: Emmett looking at the sparking and smoking control panel. Seen from behind his left shoulder. His head and left side of the body should be visible, but not the rest.

Emmett: "-before..."
Emmett: "Aw, crap...."
SFX: "Vreeem!"

Panel 2: Tony and Nick almost completely disassembled. Should look like they are in pain. The chamber should have a mild electrical charge running in and around it. Emmett is next to the chamber about to punch an emergency override box (glass and all) in front of it with his bare fist.

Tony and Nick: Empty word balloon.
SFX: "Vreeeuuuunnnnnnnnnnn!"
Emmett: "Hang on guys! I-"

Panel 3: Massive glow of the teleporter. Show that Emmett is being thrown backwards and the glass is being thrown everywhere. Emmett's hands are outstretched to protect his face from the blast. Tony and Nick are nowhere to be seen in the beam.

SFX: Explosion noise.
SFX: "VRAAAAAANNGGGHHHHH!"

Panel 4: Beam shooting off in the air, seen from outside the Manor, reaching out of the panel vertically. Some fragments from off the roof are seen flying off into the air and arcing away from the beam.

SFX: "VRANGH!" (covering most of the page, but mostly transparent)
Eve (inside Manor, so the reader only knows it's her by what she says): "EMMETT! WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT EXPLOSIVE MATERIALS IN THE MANOR?!"
Zach: Whimpering
Lydia: "Zach, what's wrong?!"

Panel 5: Show a vapor trail coming up off the ground from where Nick and Tony were teleported from. The flat spot they were on should have been blown open and some of the circuitry should be visible. Clearly display both teleporter "chambers" to show that Nick and Tony weren't teleported into the other chamber. A bit of ceiling/roof should have fallen into the chamber that they were in. Emmett should be on his back trying to get up, with his arms behind him. He should have his hands bleeding as well as a few other spots, and be looking at the teleporter chamber. Looking from behind and below Emmett slightly upward at the chambers and the hole in the ceiling, which is curved upwards. Some glass shards should be all over the room, including some embedded in the walls, computer hardware and floor. In the left side of the foreground the reader should be able to see the cord burning that had been split upon.

Emmett: "No..."
Emmett 2: "What have I done?"