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Comic 04: No Daily Value...
     Panel 1: (2/3 width; 1/3 height; Bleed top and left; Five feet behind Tony, straight, angled down slightly.)

Tony spun around with his back to the readers and the mysterious person's face and body silhouetted by the door light.  In the shadows below her face there should be a match being struck.  Above Tony's face two "!" can be used to emphasize his extreme shock.  Although the person's (Eve) body is mostly in shadow, it is affected by the light from the door Tony left open, which is in the distance behind her, angling it's light towards the lower left corner of the panel.  Some of her body is clearly lit, and some is silhouetted  In her left hand is a candle lamp, held by the ring on the base so it is pointing downward  In addition, that hand is holding a box of matches, and her right hand is striking a match against it's edge.

  Tony: "Whaaa?!"  (Bubble to left of Tony, pointing right to his approx. mouth location.)

     Panel 2: (1/4 width; Slightly over 1/3 height; Bleed top and right; Sideview, zoomed on lamp and hands.)

Eve lighting the candle lamp, holding the match vertical as it ignites the wick.  The lamp is in her right hand, and the match is in her left (which is closer to the readers).

     Panel 3: (1/2 width; Slightly less than 1/3 height; Offset right slightly; Sideview, straight.)

Eve on the left side of the panel holding a candle lamp, with slight disdain on her face.  Tony has one arm out stretched towards her and the other partially shielding his face from her, but not the readers.  Tony's overall posture seems to suggest that he's retreating into himself and is terrified, whereas Eve's is that of mild irritation.

  Eve: "Yes?"  (Bubble is above Eve's head and to the right slightly.)
  Tony: "Please don't eat me!  I'm not as nutritious as I may seem!" (Jagged edged bubble, below and to the left of Tony's outstretched arm.  All caps for his screech or not... ?)

     Panel 4: (1/2 width; Slightly less than 1/3 height; Offset right three times as much as panel 3; Sideview, straight.)

Tony wiping sweat off his brow with his right arm.  Eve looks lightly angry, with her right hand against her hip, and her left forming a fist while turning the lamp more towards her left side.  Tony is standing up now, but his posture suggests that he's regaining his wits and is still nervous.

  Eve: "Beg your pardon?"  (Bubble is higher up than her bubble in the previous panel.)
  Tony: "Oh..."  (Bubble is above Tony's other two, conjoined with his next one at the bottom of the bubble.  Off to the left of center for the next bubble.)
  Tony: "You're just a girl..." (Larger and lower than the previous bubble.  Conjoined on the top with his first bubble in the panel, and on the bottom with the next bubble.)
  Tony: "Whew."  (Conjoined on the top with the previous bubble.  The tail of the three comes off this bubble towards Tony's mouth.)
  Eve: "Just a girl?!"  (Spikey bubble below Tony's three bubbles.)

     Panel 5: (1/3 width; 2/3 height; Offset left, offset up slightly; 2/3 turned, mostly front, rotated to also show her right side.  Looking slightly downward at her.)

Eve looking smug and a bit mischievous, with a large grin, her left eye brow raised, and her right arm up stroking her chin.  Her eyes should just scream "trouble" here...  She's holding the lamp normally now, below the panel's bottom border, with the light from it showing where it obviously must be.

  Eve: "Oh wait..."  (Conjoined on the bottom with the next bubble.)
  Eve: "You're here for the job opening, aren't you?"  (Conjoined on the top with the previous panel.  The tail is pointing almost straight down to her face, curving just barely to the left in the panel.)

Description
Comic 04: No Daily Value...
     Panel 1: (2/3 width; 1/3 height; Bleed top and left; Five feet behind Tony, straight, angled down slightly.)

Tony spun around with his back to the readers and the mysterious person's face and body silhouetted by the door light.  In the shadows below her face there should be a match being struck.  Above Tony's face two "!" can be used to emphasize his extreme shock.  Although the person's (Eve) body is mostly in shadow, it is affected by the light from the door Tony left open, which is in the distance behind her, angling it's light towards the lower left corner of the panel.  Some of her body is clearly lit, and some is silhouetted  In her left hand is a candle lamp, held by the ring on the base so it is pointing downward  In addition, that hand is holding a box of matches, and her right hand is striking a match against it's edge.

  Tony: "Whaaa?!"  (Bubble to left of Tony, pointing right to his approx. mouth location.)

     Panel 2: (1/4 width; Slightly over 1/3 height; Bleed top and right; Sideview, zoomed on lamp and hands.)

Eve lighting the candle lamp, holding the match vertical as it ignites the wick.  The lamp is in her right hand, and the match is in her left (which is closer to the readers).

     Panel 3: (1/2 width; Slightly less than 1/3 height; Offset right slightly; Sideview, straight.)

Eve on the left side of the panel holding a candle lamp, with slight disdain on her face.  Tony has one arm out stretched towards her and the other partially shielding his face from her, but not the readers.  Tony's overall posture seems to suggest that he's retreating into himself and is terrified, whereas Eve's is that of mild irritation.

  Eve: "Yes?"  (Bubble is above Eve's head and to the right slightly.)
  Tony: "Please don't eat me!  I'm not as nutritious as I may seem!" (Jagged edged bubble, below and to the left of Tony's outstretched arm.  All caps for his screech or not... ?)

     Panel 4: (1/2 width; Slightly less than 1/3 height; Offset right three times as much as panel 3; Sideview, straight.)

Tony wiping sweat off his brow with his right arm.  Eve looks lightly angry, with her right hand against her hip, and her left forming a fist while turning the lamp more towards her left side.  Tony is standing up now, but his posture suggests that he's regaining his wits and is still nervous.

  Eve: "Beg your pardon?"  (Bubble is higher up than her bubble in the previous panel.)
  Tony: "Oh..."  (Bubble is above Tony's other two, conjoined with his next one at the bottom of the bubble.  Off to the left of center for the next bubble.)
  Tony: "You're just a girl..." (Larger and lower than the previous bubble.  Conjoined on the top with his first bubble in the panel, and on the bottom with the next bubble.)
  Tony: "Whew."  (Conjoined on the top with the previous bubble.  The tail of the three comes off this bubble towards Tony's mouth.)
  Eve: "Just a girl?!"  (Spikey bubble below Tony's three bubbles.)

     Panel 5: (1/3 width; 2/3 height; Offset left, offset up slightly; 2/3 turned, mostly front, rotated to also show her right side.  Looking slightly downward at her.)

Eve looking smug and a bit mischievous, with a large grin, her left eye brow raised, and her right arm up stroking her chin.  Her eyes should just scream "trouble" here...  She's holding the lamp normally now, below the panel's bottom border, with the light from it showing where it obviously must be.

  Eve: "Oh wait..."  (Conjoined on the bottom with the next bubble.)
  Eve: "You're here for the job opening, aren't you?"  (Conjoined on the top with the previous panel.  The tail is pointing almost straight down to her face, curving just barely to the left in the panel.)