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Published: 2005-08-08 09:18:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Wet and coldI hold you
Tears and rain
I sing to you
Fear and love
I change you life
Standing here on this wooden bridge
A bridge between worlds.
Thunder rolls between the clouds
The Moon peeks through
The tiniest of openings
You said
Saving me will be your downfall
I said
I've already fallen
You smiled
I cried
You hold me now
The truth unviels
I wasnt saving you
You were saving me
As the rain falls down
I call out to the wind
Standing on this bridge from long ago
Will you come again i wonder?
Or was my salvation
A moment of hope?
A dream?
Hands
Cold hands
You're here, it wasnt just a dream
You're real
As am I
I turn to see you
But your not there
Nobody is
Just the wind
And the rain
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Comments: 6
im totally with the "sad" and dark kinda feeling. its the only way i can write down my songs, is in a pretty sappy way. i really enjoyed reading it.
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ooh so sad
I like it thought, it flows nicely. I like the last verse the most.
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wow... you are a very talented writer, this is the best piece i have read tonight 
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ouch. that must hurt. and that reminds me of a story i wrote. i dunno but this read more like prose than poetry. perhaps you can work on the organization some more.
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