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If you can't read my handwriting thats perfectly ok! It's pretty much the same from the manga and then a recap ramble from Half-pint.

Mainly I was confused why on the train Tenmei knew what had happened. In fact she was the one who brought up the topic to Jotaro but then quickly "changes" the topic on him. Jotaro seemed eager to talk about it with her as if he hadn't got to before hand. So he wasnt the one who filled her in, then who did? The others weren't involved in this conversation as if it wasn't something that concerned them.

When Half-Pint called and explained the situation, she asked "Is this JoJo's grandpa?" Before waiting for an answer she keeps going. The person on the otherside of the line only says "Woah! Slow down! What are you talking about? Where are you?"

If this was Grandpa or Avdol answering they would have understood that the message on the TV was right, that Tenmei Kakyoin was a traitor. They would not have been so confused at the panicked mention of Kakyoin's name.

If it was Polnareff he wouldn't have asked later on the train, "what happened to that girl?" Because the person on the line gave the impression that they were planning to go to Half-pint's location to help her and get the rest of the story.

So to me it only makes that it was actually Tenmei that answered the call which makes more sense to why it pans behind Jotaro to Half-pint sleeping in the other car. ( Half-pint would only be in Tenmei's line of sight as well)

This could have been funny it I knew how to flesh it out better. And I wasn't in the mood to draw Jotaro... sorry..

Wow I'd be surprised if anyone reads all this!

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If you can't read my handwriting thats perfectly ok! It's pretty much the same from the manga and then a recap ramble from Half-pint.

Mainly I was confused why on the train Tenmei knew what had happened. In fact she was the one who brought up the topic to Jotaro but then quickly "changes" the topic on him. Jotaro seemed eager to talk about it with her as if he hadn't got to before hand. So he wasnt the one who filled her in, then who did? The others weren't involved in this conversation as if it wasn't something that concerned them.

When Half-Pint called and explained the situation, she asked "Is this JoJo's grandpa?" Before waiting for an answer she keeps going. The person on the otherside of the line only says "Woah! Slow down! What are you talking about? Where are you?"

If this was Grandpa or Avdol answering they would have understood that the message on the TV was right, that Tenmei Kakyoin was a traitor. They would not have been so confused at the panicked mention of Kakyoin's name.

If it was Polnareff he wouldn't have asked later on the train, "what happened to that girl?" Because the person on the line gave the impression that they were planning to go to Half-pint's location to help her and get the rest of the story.

So to me it only makes that it was actually Tenmei that answered the call which makes more sense to why it pans behind Jotaro to Half-pint sleeping in the other car. ( Half-pint would only be in Tenmei's line of sight as well)

This could have been funny it I knew how to flesh it out better. And I wasn't in the mood to draw Jotaro... sorry..

Wow I'd be surprised if anyone reads all this!