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Published: 2013-01-28 23:40:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 669; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 3
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Description This is my entry for `s contest. Info: [link]


Caligo and Eyllis Β©
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Comments: 49

Nitidus [2013-03-05 05:23:41 +0000 UTC]

The drawing and coloring look great. However...

I think the animation is more of a distraction than a help :/ . It makes it harder to appreciate the image. Also, since the animation isn't very smooth (I can see the different frames like tick-tick-tick, jumping from one frame to the next instead of a nice fade.), it sort of bothers me. The animation also moves a bit too fast so it seems like this constant blinking. With a romantic moment, I think it needs to be drawn out a bit more. (For example, he touches her cheek and there is a pause as they look at each other, then slowly fade to white.) If you add some more transition frames for the fade and work on the timing a bit (so it doesn't feel so abrupt or blinky), I think your animation would be a lot better.

The picture by itself, without animation would look nice as well.

That's just what I think. Again, I do think you draw well, it's just that it was hard to look at the image and soak in the details when it was constantly disappearing and reappearing.

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naoguiarts In reply to Nitidus [2013-03-05 17:09:10 +0000 UTC]

OHH!!! I understand
This is the first time I try an "animation" like this one, so I really appreciate your comment Do you think that if I let the pic (the colored draw) more time in the screen it looks better? or should I let more time every frame?

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Nitidus In reply to naoguiarts [2013-03-06 04:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I think that if you let the full colored drawing have more time on the screen, it would look better.

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naoguiarts In reply to Nitidus [2013-03-06 05:01:24 +0000 UTC]

All right!!
Thank you very much for your help!!

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sugarislife28 [2013-01-31 21:19:29 +0000 UTC]

that looks amazing!!

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naoguiarts In reply to sugarislife28 [2013-01-31 22:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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sugarislife28 In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-31 23:11:35 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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paichai [2013-01-31 20:19:27 +0000 UTC]

eeeeeee this is so cuuteeee! /w\
the animation is really well done too!
good luck in the contest!

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naoguiarts In reply to paichai [2013-01-31 20:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much dear!! Im glad you like it!!

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paichai In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-31 20:49:56 +0000 UTC]

ah you're welcomee!! * U*

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naoguiarts In reply to paichai [2013-01-31 21:50:59 +0000 UTC]

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Chaak-kun [2013-01-31 05:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww, que lindo *-*

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naoguiarts In reply to Chaak-kun [2013-01-31 15:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias! creo que me pegΓ³ la fiebre de las animaciones HAHA XD

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Chaak-kun In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-31 21:51:58 +0000 UTC]

esta bien n__n es pesado animar >o<

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naoguiarts In reply to Chaak-kun [2013-01-31 22:51:37 +0000 UTC]

SI, una vez intente hacer uno al estilo antiguo dibujo por dibujo pero la verdad no creo tener tanta paciencia como para hacer uno a color

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Chaak-kun In reply to naoguiarts [2013-02-01 01:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Yo tuve que hacer eso para una clase de AnimaciΓ³n x__X Es un poco pesado xD

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naoguiarts In reply to Chaak-kun [2013-02-01 01:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Si, me lo imagino @.@ yo no lo pinte por eso y que animaste? (fue aparte de tu icono?)

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Chaak-kun In reply to naoguiarts [2013-02-01 05:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Si xD TratΓ© de hacer uno de los sirvientes de Chaak subiendo a una nube pero me costΓ³ trabajo porque cada dibu me salΓ­a un poco diferente y chuequΓ­n xD

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naoguiarts In reply to Chaak-kun [2013-02-01 17:43:58 +0000 UTC]

WAA!! me encantaria verlo!

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HeaffyCow [2013-01-31 01:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh this is so beautiful!! I love the pose, it's so adorable and the animation is awesome!

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naoguiarts In reply to HeaffyCow [2013-01-31 15:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!! Im glad you like it! I still need more practice with animations, but it was really fun to do

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DownwardSpiralxx [2013-01-30 04:26:07 +0000 UTC]

I love it so cool and the picture looks beautiful!!!

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naoguiarts In reply to DownwardSpiralxx [2013-01-30 18:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Im glad you like it!

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Kirie-na [2013-01-29 20:22:15 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooooo how cool and romantic

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naoguiarts In reply to Kirie-na [2013-01-29 20:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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KyaroruKiniro [2013-01-29 19:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Que bonito y ademΓ‘s le has puesto el efecto ese brillantoso de luz (quΓ© bien me explico(?))

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naoguiarts In reply to KyaroruKiniro [2013-01-29 19:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias! Si, me encanta ese efecto en los animes

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Miau-nya [2013-01-29 09:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Mai gΓ³! Un gif!! xDDDDD

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naoguiarts In reply to Miau-nya [2013-01-29 17:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Si, me di cuenta de que necesito practicar animaciones para los avatares y aprovechando la imagen del contest intentΓ© algo

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Lee-Kate [2013-01-29 06:06:16 +0000 UTC]

*speechless*

OMG hun!!!! I can't say the words how this is beautiful and I want to cry from happiness. OMG OMG OMG This is so awasome. You did this animation picture like you are reading my mind because this kinda scene will be in my story later. But omg you suprised me.You didn't say anything that you will enter my contest. Thank you so much for entering and doing this for me <3

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-29 17:11:40 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Really?
I wasnt sure about participating because I didnt know If I would have time enough to finish it, so I decided just work on it and send it when I finish it
Im glad you like it dear!

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-29 17:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah really This kinda will happen in my story And I'm still speechless when I see your drawing <3 I am amazed.
I'm glad you did this for me. Can I just ask you something can you send me just a picture so that I can put it on my desktop?

And I really love this picture. Once more thank you so much for participating in my contest

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-29 19:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I wish you good luck with your story... I havent read it because Im very slow reading texts in english, but your characters looks very cool!
Sure! no problem dear: [link]
You are very welcome! Im happy of participate!

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-30 06:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I'm glad you like characters <3
If you ever read it I hope it will be interesting to you
And thank you for link I love it <3

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-30 17:56:21 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!
I know that it will be a great story but first I need to know more english

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-30 18:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Well you have time I'm not good at english either XD

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-30 18:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Really? Do you speak other language? which one?

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-30 18:44:45 +0000 UTC]

English is not my first language.My first language is croatian,and I also lerned 3 years german but I'm bad at writting sentences and I also know a little of japanese xd

Which language do you know?

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-30 18:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Someday could you please teach me some phrases in croatian?
My first language is spanish

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-30 19:03:27 +0000 UTC]

I can teach you anytime you want.
For example "Volim te" it means I love you :3

Could you teach me some phrases on your language?

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-30 19:14:15 +0000 UTC]

WA!! Sounds beautiful! How do you say "Thank you?"

Sure! what kind of phrases would you like?

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Lee-Kate In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-30 19:18:07 +0000 UTC]

We say "Hvala" or "Hvala ti puno" what means Thank you very much

How do you say I love you,or You are cute!

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naoguiarts In reply to Lee-Kate [2013-01-30 19:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

In spanish:

"I love you" You can say it in 2 ways:
"Te amo" (usually for your boy/girl) and
"Te quiero" (usually for friends and family) you can say any of them

"You are cute" : "que linda" (for girls) "que lindo" (for boys)
Other ways are: "que bella" (for girls) "que bello" (for boys)

We change a little the words depending on the genre

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Mega-Kitsune [2013-01-28 23:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Hermoso~~ <3

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naoguiarts In reply to Mega-Kitsune [2013-01-28 23:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias!!

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Mega-Kitsune In reply to naoguiarts [2013-01-28 23:55:26 +0000 UTC]

No hay de quΓ©~

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naoguiarts In reply to Mega-Kitsune [2013-01-28 23:57:44 +0000 UTC]

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Suzumeny-chan [2013-01-28 23:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Que sweet

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naoguiarts In reply to Suzumeny-chan [2013-01-28 23:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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