Tonioo [2004-03-29 17:14:50 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me a certain "Sweetback" damage for the size!

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dat-grrrl-jah [2003-12-26 06:44:09 +0000 UTC]

stunning
i will join the list of people who have said that your words descibe themselves, or another so perfectly
im going through pretty much this same situation right at this very moment, and your words brought to surface a lot of things i havent been able to put on paper myslef
good job

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jorgesarcos [2003-11-06 23:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Man... i never... NEVER read poems here at DA, i think they r boring, but... just because u "take" from my works i came to see this and believe me... u touched my heart with this... DEEPLY!!! i broke with my GF just two weeks ago, and this poems went directly to that same place where my GF was, ur poems have a chance with me... i know a lot of people that doesnt read poems for the same reason i do, so instead of giving you a Fav ill post this on my journal and put a link to your page... man reading this was awesome, not the feeling i wanted to remember, but... believe me, is very hard to find words that can make u feel like i did... and u just did it... Congrats man!

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jochra [2003-03-28 14:57:27 +0000 UTC]

The continuous contrast of the nonchalant indifference versus the pouring out of your heart is what makes this so interesting for me.

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utro [2002-07-11 00:14:54 +0000 UTC]

the repetition of the title as every other line adds beautifully to the impact of every line that follows it. I love this for its honesty and its reality. I love this because I've felt it before. All of it. I love this because of what it says and how you say it. You have an amazing heart. And I hope you continue to pour it out through your writing.

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mr-lala [2002-06-04 01:17:23 +0000 UTC]

wow...this poem is great...i thought my work was good..but this is amazing..btw..i recently posted a poem called 'the end" in this section...but under "complete poem"..it doesnt show up..why is that??

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negative-zero [2002-06-03 05:09:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you, both. it feels good to hear other people appreciating work that's close to yourself. thanks again!

~NegZ
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Defy convention. Defy rules. Defy math... Negative Zero.

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bktec [2002-06-02 17:55:18 +0000 UTC]

my gf broke up with me a few days ago. this is beautiful.. my eyes are watering
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i need music to set me free, to let me bleed

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cure-shot [2002-06-02 16:10:43 +0000 UTC]

just so u know!!!
** this is amazing....!

JUST SO U KNOW!!! U ARE AN ARTIST!!!!***

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