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Published: 2002-08-28 15:15:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 340; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 112
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Description revalation


bitterness
resentment
anger
shame

loathing
tears
grief
blame

pain
agony
ache
why?

numb
detached
don't even
try

not listening
not caring
ok maybe
a little

emotions
too much
they leave me
crippled

no more
not worth it
never again
i swear it

not ever
not me
i will not
share it

minutes
days
months
years

empty
longing
wanting
you here

no
not you
that's not it
at all

seeking
answers
revelation
the fall

is worth it
after all
this time
i see

this time
be sure
the person's
worth me.


~Donovan-D
© 2001
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Comments: 7

BebopJul [2003-11-23 13:35:47 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!! thats so kool^^

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kittyslit [2003-11-14 04:47:40 +0000 UTC]

and so it does begin..

-.-


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jorgesarcos [2003-11-07 00:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Concept is awesome... the way u wrotte it makes an even more interesting point of view the words r great too as well as the description... almost perfect! keep it up!

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siona [2003-08-04 02:08:23 +0000 UTC]

fantastic.very song like.

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foureyes [2003-05-14 15:37:53 +0000 UTC]

very nice !....your emotions are real......love the words !!!!!!!!!!!

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crackedmirror [2003-01-09 07:13:56 +0000 UTC]

short and brutal/
you bleed to
me.
spent your words-
an orgasm
of truth.

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settheairafire [2002-08-28 15:25:31 +0000 UTC]

uhm.. heh, on a lighter note.. I think the guy bears a slight resemblance to Silent Bob. snoochie boochies.

-travis

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