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Published: 2008-11-12 09:49:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 42814; Favourites: 1023; Downloads: 2315
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Based on future events after the end of mine and Kitteh's fic My13 . Sasuke and Naruto split up because Sasuke tells Naruto of a fling he had with his brother in Akatsuki prior to returning to Konoha. During the split Sasuke finds Naruto on a date with some girl. x8


A mock comic panel based on the same events can be found here (which is also the 'spectacle' Sasuke speaks about): [link]


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Snippet for top panel:

Naruto rested his chin down on his knees, just watching Sasuke. Even if there were bouts of silence between them at least Sasuke would know he was still there, even with the hitai-ate over his eyes, since he would feel his weight through the mattress. But he was struggling with a topic, neutral topics were hard to come by and he wasn't the master of intelligent conversation.

"S-so I guess you're on sick leave right?" Naruto shifted. "Do you know when you'll start doing missions again?"

"Not really." Sasuke didn't even want to think about missions. He had actually forgotten about such things the entire time he had hidden himself away, he only worried about his rank the day he had made a spectacle of himself. It was only inevitable the topic would be brought up. "I'll have to start up again at some point if I want to pay the rent on this room. I just don't feel much up to anything right now."



Snippet for bottom panel:

An idea came to Sasuke's mind; one that was sure to backfire, but there was nothing to lose by now. He reached around to dig inside the night table that was beside the bed until he got what he was looking for. Sasuke crawled over and settled himself a safe enough distance away from Naruto, just enough so he could reach over and rest a certain plush cat on Naruto's knee.

"What's wrong?" Sasuke spoke for the plush cat while he urged it to poke Naruto's head with its nose. "Why are you so sad, mew-mew?"

That simple little childish act had tears falling from Naruto's eyes, he was caught between several emotions. He quickly rubbed his eyes and peeked over his arm to look at the kitty plush that poked his head. "H-hello Hana." Naruto couldn't keep the smile away even if his eyes were glossy from tears. He snuck a hand out to pet Hana on the head as if the kitty was real. "I'm sad because I'm worried about Sasuke."

"Why are you so worried about him, mew-mew?”

"Cuz... he's all sick. A-and I want to make sure he's okay." Naruto sniffled again and he couldn't help unfolding his arms to toy with Hana's ears. "Even if we're not together, that doesn't mean I want him to hurt. Even if I'm angry at him, even if I'm hurt and feeling betrayed, I want him to be happy. Because if Sasuke can be happy, I know I can be happy too."

"He didn't mean to hurt you, mew-mew." Hana's voice had grown much softer and more broken. "He never wanted to hurt you at all. But I don't think he'll ever really be happy again, because the only thing that ever really mattered to him is gone, mew-mew."


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Comments: 164

DreamMasquerade [2009-01-21 04:54:16 +0000 UTC]

awww, you almost made ME cry. That is sooo cute ^-^

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demondreams [2009-01-11 08:41:51 +0000 UTC]

that is ridiculously adorable

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Queen-Gaz [2008-12-31 06:19:59 +0000 UTC]

This was sas but also cute. It's such a sweet idea. ^^ I'm faving.

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kawkun [2008-12-27 18:23:41 +0000 UTC]

KYA!
this is so cute I feel like a rainbow of kawaiiness exploded inside of me...

O.o its a funny sensation

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neofox In reply to kawkun [2008-12-27 20:44:16 +0000 UTC]

warm and fuzzy like you swallowed a kitten? o:

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kawkun In reply to neofox [2008-12-27 22:20:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah! but instead of slashing all my insides, he`s sleeping and purring and it tickles :3

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sneere [2008-12-17 05:43:14 +0000 UTC]

way to cute

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GetsuRyuu [2008-12-12 15:15:50 +0000 UTC]

SO CUTE!! ~
i love it~

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UchihaSakura666 [2008-11-30 20:56:21 +0000 UTC]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa
cute! >.<

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mcnoodlebottom [2008-11-30 06:10:11 +0000 UTC]

O.O

oh ma goodness...im reading My 13 right now, and i'm not that far in....i didnt mean to read the discription, i didnt know
i read that and my pen fell out of my mouth. (i chew on stuff...)

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neofox In reply to mcnoodlebottom [2008-11-30 07:42:37 +0000 UTC]

No worries, this takes place.. hmm- aaaafter My13. c: Much father in. It's kind of in between, after My13 but before it's sequel. : D

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mcnoodlebottom In reply to neofox [2008-12-01 05:16:48 +0000 UTC]

ah! that far! wowzers. maybe ill forget (even if i dont, i will probably still be shocked when i read it...im kind of a moron like that XP).


...you guys rule.

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Kasai-no-Kitsune [2008-11-27 19:21:38 +0000 UTC]

Obligatory BAWWWW.

I need to read this story now. 8.8 Speaking through Hana was a brilliant plot device, I'm impressed already. xDD;;

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neofox In reply to Kasai-no-Kitsune [2008-11-27 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]

c: Kitteh's idea <3 She's a brilliant little calico.

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Kasai-no-Kitsune In reply to neofox [2008-11-28 06:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, good for her. ^___^ The picture is really good too, I fav'd it so I won't forget to read the story when I find the time. >///<

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Doggy-Yasha [2008-11-20 21:44:44 +0000 UTC]

wahhh *tears up from the artists comments* ..thats so sad..i must read that fic.

very cute comic

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GoldenAdonis [2008-11-19 05:12:04 +0000 UTC]

That's just too cute.

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FunnyLoveGirl [2008-11-19 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Aw Sasuke snuggle Naruto with a cat puppet. It so cute!

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ClampMe [2008-11-16 00:37:34 +0000 UTC]

aww. so sweet.

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KasonSama [2008-11-14 20:20:56 +0000 UTC]

TT^TT ITS SO CUTE! *sob*

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Migoto-jin [2008-11-14 02:44:31 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! KITTY PUPPET!! XD lol

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In-The-Machine [2008-11-13 21:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or is that bed huge?

Or I'm just poor...

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iliveinaworldoflies [2008-11-13 20:36:29 +0000 UTC]

-sniffles-

It's so sweet... Niii... I just love how well you and Kitteh work together. It's amazing...

I luff you gais >_>

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Luvmisistas123 [2008-11-13 13:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Awwww. That's cute!

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madewithflesh [2008-11-13 06:12:13 +0000 UTC]

man, i'm such a loser.
this is teh first thing in weeks that really made me smile, in a childish, sad way, but a real smile.
(some guy also told me to smile at the gas station once, it was probably the nicest thing ever.)
i miss this story, and the idea of these two breaking up breaks my heart a little.
i do hope they get back together.

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neofox In reply to madewithflesh [2008-11-13 07:13:00 +0000 UTC]

c: Glad it made you smile.
Don't worry, these two could never live apart from each other <3

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princhi1 [2008-11-13 04:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Awwww.

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NekoTaka [2008-11-13 03:17:55 +0000 UTC]

SO cute!

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Shika-a [2008-11-13 01:49:27 +0000 UTC]

aww so cute <3

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CandyAxe [2008-11-13 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Awww. Bottom panel for the love. ♥

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Riley-Cat [2008-11-13 01:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Awww, makes me wanna flail my arms in fangirlish-ness

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ATeenageWitchling [2008-11-13 01:19:33 +0000 UTC]

I haven't even read the fanfic (not a big fan of Naruto ) and i already had tears welling up by the end of the second snippet.
IT'S SO ADORABLE AND CUTE AND EMOTIONAL!!!
You guys are invincible together, seriously!!

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whitefloweronmygrave [2008-11-13 00:54:15 +0000 UTC]



I feel... pathetic |D

I'm listening to a really sad song and I find this picture and I read the description and it's all like D'AAAAWWWWWWWWW. Everyone in the room I'm in is staring at me like I'm insane xD

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Joeyrox1995 [2008-11-13 00:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Awww, how touching!

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Awkwardly-Handsome [2008-11-12 23:41:47 +0000 UTC]

awww! it's so cute! it almost made me cry!

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BohemianCloud [2008-11-12 23:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Such a sad comic... the excerpt made me cry!

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FelineWannaBe [2008-11-12 22:58:06 +0000 UTC]

*points to the shadow under the bed*

It's Kakashi, the first ever SasuNaru fangirl. I just know it!

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legomyedo [2008-11-12 22:20:16 +0000 UTC]

DAAAAAAAAAAW!!! I got teared up god damn it!!! DAAAaaaaaaaAAAAAAaaaaaaAAAAAaaaaaWWWWWwwwwwwWWWW!!!!!

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UndergroundRacer57 [2008-11-12 20:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Aw, that's really sad and sweet. I love how simplistic the line art is. It's so nice.

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Nimbose [2008-11-12 19:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Simply adorable. <3

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ryumaiden [2008-11-12 19:05:50 +0000 UTC]

o.o i wanna squeeze that plushie

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HatakeHinata [2008-11-12 17:19:30 +0000 UTC]

awww!!!

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innu-amaranth [2008-11-12 16:32:09 +0000 UTC]

You're such a great drawer!

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ShiiLovesHim [2008-11-12 16:06:22 +0000 UTC]

ugggh I've avoided it for so long! I was finally out of the NartutoxSasuke shipping and I really love you're guys stories so I avoided my 13 like the plague but that snippet might have just got me DX

love the simple style used

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neofox In reply to ShiiLovesHim [2008-11-12 19:58:19 +0000 UTC]

c: welcome back <3 NOW READ!

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ScarlettStar [2008-11-12 15:13:47 +0000 UTC]

so cute!

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ginwu [2008-11-12 14:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so cute!

If you guys need a beta, I'll do it for you.

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rxnlp [2008-11-12 13:31:21 +0000 UTC]

sweet! ^^

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gothgrrl13 [2008-11-12 13:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww! That's so sweet of Sasuke! X3

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Aemi [2008-11-12 11:24:08 +0000 UTC]

damn it!
I squeed.
<_<

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