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///Edit A DD? Oh my... wow, thank you so much ^KovoWolf for featuring! A DA dream just came true!Halloween!
Isn't he adorable? He is still gonna eat you, though.
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Becken95 In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 12:52:00 +0000 UTC]
I love the wolf's expression! This is a very lovely piece, but would you mind if I gave a little critique?
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Neovirah In reply to Becken95 [2012-11-18 13:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Of course not! Please do.
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Becken95 In reply to Neovirah [2012-11-18 17:31:20 +0000 UTC]
Great! I'll do my best, although I'm not nearly as good as you artistically. Just bear with me.
So, what I thought I could mention was the lightsource you used behind the werewolf (the one that's sort of "coming from the viewer"). I think it looks unnatural in a way, like it's not supposed to be there. I'm guessing that this is a Halloween-picture, so I think it would look a lot scarier and more dramatic if there weren't such a bright flash on the werewolf, and you could instead just use the moonlight for a dramatic effect (I see that you did a little of that on the left side, but the other lightsource kind of takes away that effect) That way, the eyes would stand out more as well, and it would look a hell lot creepier.
However, I think the lightsource could work if it was a little bit dimmer and more focused, it could be more like a person with a torch approaching it (and facing a cruel fate, unfortunately).
I also think the background and the werewolf sort of doesn't blend well together, but that might be because of the lightsource. It also might be because the werewolf is a lot more detailed than the background. I think that would be solved by just adding a little more detail to the closest part of the background (especially the grass and the stoneroad) so it fits the very detailed werewolf. I'm not talking about the entire background at all, it just seems a little odd that the legs are very detailed, but the grass right beside them are way more stylized.
I think that's all I had to say, overall I think you did a great job, especially on the anatomy and expression of the wolf.
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Neovirah In reply to Becken95 [2012-11-18 18:02:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique! I was actually trying to make the light source like it was a person with a torch behind him. But I didn't really nail that torch-feeling I guess! I totally agree on that background need some details and finishing. But I don't think I'm going to spend any more time on this piece but I'm going to try improving these elements next time drawing! Thank you so much!
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Becken95 In reply to Neovirah [2012-11-18 21:22:54 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Yeah, I got the feeling that it was a torchlight, but it seemed a little too bright for that, I think a torchlight kinda looks a bit warmer and a little bit dimmer. Again, you're welcome, I'm glad to help.
Also, congratulations on the DD!
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SchattenLotus In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 11:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Am~aaazing Picture. Very well done ... ...
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KiranBenning In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 11:25:34 +0000 UTC]
WOW!! Such an awesome picture and Congrats on the DD!!
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spacecoloniie In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 11:25:32 +0000 UTC]
My goodness, I LOVE this picture. The lighting, the composition, the background, just wow<3 Congrats on the well deserved DD!!
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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 10:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Awww, he's so handso-AAHHH MY HAND!!!! DX Bad dog!!!
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Lakword [2012-11-18 10:25:12 +0000 UTC]
lol You got the effect which I wanted to make when I was making a werewolf XD Nice job
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Itchys-rats In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 09:25:53 +0000 UTC]
love it! it has a kind of Skyrim-is feel of it both the werewolf and the little village
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Neovirah In reply to Itchys-rats [2012-11-18 10:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Oh that's neat, I love skyrim! ♥
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Itchys-rats In reply to Neovirah [2012-11-18 11:43:56 +0000 UTC]
you are very welcome ^_^
and who can't love skyrim
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SabreBash In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 08:49:42 +0000 UTC]
This is great, but i must point out, the werewolf is quite well shaded, but casts no shadow.
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Neovirah In reply to SabreBash [2012-11-18 11:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Ah! I see what you mean. Most of the casted shadow would go down in the slope but I do agree that a few rocks near him should had been more shaded.
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MoltoFuckingBene In reply to SabreBash [2012-11-18 09:06:06 +0000 UTC]
The shadow would be in front of it and because the ground slopes down you probably wouldn't see it
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SabreBash In reply to MoltoFuckingBene [2012-11-18 09:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Ah! I didn't think it sloped that much but i see what you mean.
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MoltoFuckingBene In reply to SabreBash [2012-11-18 09:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah haha I can see why it was confusing but with the floor closer to the fence you can tell its a distance down
There's one rock kind of on the border which confused me
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Duuderos In reply to ??? [2012-11-18 08:41:31 +0000 UTC]
OMG !! ! !! ♥ GOOD PIC ♥ ♥_♥ I LOVE THIS PIC ♥ !!!
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