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nokros — Continuity Error
Published: 2004-10-30 02:01:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 205; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description circling around
in eliptical lassos
  (moving from place to place)
i once was found
but now am lost
memories t r a n s f e r r i n g . . .
                               .please wait.
  (moving from time to time)
to the familiar
  dis-
           disjointed
      disoriented
dis?
turn around, something’s            gone
  paradox
        parabola
              parascope
                     parachute
turn around, something’s back
merged
  (moving from mind to mind)

someone screwed up my continuity
impossible mission
  grasping for footholes
  on a roundabout stage
             round
            sound
            wound
            found
  weaving through sets
  as rain falls on the mountain
          un-
  unsure
                                         unknown
  un...escape?
incorrect
    (x)
by whose word
who sh all judge?
              falling
           calling
         caller
       cellular
dis association
     unassociation
noassociation?
incorrect
    (x)
or wro-- ...ight (or what)?
who can tell me?
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Comments: 1

ssa3512 [2004-11-14 18:52:22 +0000 UTC]

I love this, the way the words seem to twist around in the mind. I always love your writing, but this piece really stands out.

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