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nullset — Self Worth
Published: 2002-02-21 22:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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My first poetic work, I have better, but this one is always on my mind. It's about a friend who has all but still thinks about suicide because or her "self worth" not being to good. It makes me wonder.Related content
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Its missing a few things ... rhymes of you ask me
The fact that a person's suicidal can be countered easily, 'sides, if the person talks about it, tis a proven fact that they prolly never will do it; dont worry; i've been thru it myself and with others, enough to know
Good luck anyway
Try rhyming the poem, metaphores maybe ? dunno.
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leave me to die i am no more
leave this rose upon my grave
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