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Published: 2006-12-22 03:12:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description waves splattering
emotions shattering
     crush

mind is obsolete
logic is deceit
      crushed

clichéd heart racing
those butterflies inter-pacing
feelings soon will self implode
but the sea still ever flows

       you
my weak spot
tie me in that familiar knot
hormones should be shot.
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Comments: 2

Sophieham [2006-12-23 15:28:09 +0000 UTC]

awesome poem! they should!

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leeann [2006-12-23 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]

OOOOLIIIIIIVIIIIIAAA

I love how you take something so depressing and actually make it really witty, in the sort of sly way that you do With the rhymes, at that last line...bravo!

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