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Published: 2002-08-11 19:32:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 52
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Description So this is life:

Never knowing when to take a step
then be chastised
for stepping in the wrong direction.

Deciding not to take a step
then be ridiculed
for standing still.

Deciding that it's time to run
then be ignored
for running away.

Thinking of coming back
then be hurt
that no one would care.

Thinking of caring again
then be aware
that then they are gone.

Going away
then be
somewhere else.

Walking a wire
then see
what will happen.
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Comments: 5

bsphotography [2003-01-12 12:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Very Nice.. I Like the scenery... the water flow etc.. Just wondering what camera did you use??

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hedda [2002-08-12 21:29:22 +0000 UTC]

so sad..... I can relate a bit...



remember that people who care don't leave...

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jade [2002-08-12 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Love the flow of this... love the thoughts in creates... wonderful rhythm. Wonderful.

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rebelchic [2002-08-12 00:02:51 +0000 UTC]

a lot of truth in this...its sad and sick to live in a world like this. wonderful work here. it says a lot.

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duvessa [2002-08-11 19:40:50 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this poem.....maybe cuz it reflects my life so well......dunno....it's just.....wonderful...

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