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orangetot — From Within
Published: 2003-03-15 15:18:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description You will have to look for your beauty elsewhere
It wont come from within
Unless it crawls and weeps and begs
To be any other colour.
So come dance with me
And lie to me
Everything that I want to be told.
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Comments: 3

polyhymnia [2003-08-30 15:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Interesting - I love those first 4 lines, which I find really powerful, particularly with the idea of begging 'to be any other colour'.

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skribbledot [2003-08-16 10:55:14 +0000 UTC]

I can see why you said it is like my poem. It has exactly the same significance. Lovely - Yours is better, more poignant methinks.

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i-apathy [2003-03-21 19:05:20 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what to make of it, but dammit, I like it!

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