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All you areIs war a
Of self -
Revolution of will,
Led by foreign captains
And fought at home.
A gory war,
With no rules
Except to be fierce
And nothing else
Except to be hidden
In this small city
Except to be quiet
And forever pretend
All you are
Is no mans land.
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ChibiBubblegum [2004-02-09 17:59:58 +0000 UTC]
there is such depth here that I can't begin to touch it
your tactful use of methaphore shows a contradiction in the way of existence in the subject,
specifically with
"Led by foreign captains
And fought at home."
it can be applied to both self (in terms of how each person dictates what the do in accordance with whom they want to be accepted by) and others as we observe them being influenced, though I don't know if you meant it as such
this is one of my favorites of yours
you're incredible
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