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Published: 2004-02-08 18:59:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description This girl asks all the questions
That nobody needs to answer right now
Except,
Why did you let me wait so long
To let you
Ease away my language
Of nothing much
To let you
Teach me your nature
Of shape and space
To let you
Set aside everything
Outside of here.
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Comments: 3

pachunka [2004-02-14 14:36:11 +0000 UTC]

I feel silly that the human beofre me understood it. :/

I certainly enjoy reading it over and over again, though-- you're able to swish words like a pppainting-- *something else intelligent*

I love it. :j

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DistortionWithin [2004-02-12 21:26:05 +0000 UTC]

i like this i understand it like it lots

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ChibiBubblegum [2004-02-09 18:02:57 +0000 UTC]

reading your work is like listening to the wind blow,
or the rain fall
it seems completely natural as it comes from you,
and even as it can sometimes be imensely violent and passionate,
it flows in the way that nature does as its tornados rip through the towns
it is always hard to pinpoint your subject or your real take behind each piece, but it is never hard to
uncover a strong feeling that you awake with your language
another great work

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