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Published: 2008-04-14 20:31:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I would like some feedback on this so I can know what to fix/alter before I commit it to photoshop. This will take me unbelievable amount of time once I get started, and I want to know how to make it look better. Basically, I want to have a sort of crystalline armor so that's why there is pencil marks below the main ones... yeah, so, help out please, I want the photoshoped job to look awesome ^^

Oh,.,, Also going to add some blood maybe, right or wrong?

I am putting this in the scraps section because I don't want this one mixing with any of the others before it's really done
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Comments: 5

BLIX007 [2008-04-22 21:04:23 +0000 UTC]

I figured out the tracing thing after getting frustrated with all the erasing and scanning as well. I guess it is true what my dad says if you want something done quicker find a lazy man to do it. Best of luck to ya

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BLIX007 [2008-04-22 15:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Everytime before I scan a pic in for coloring I get tracing paper and trace over the drawing in pen, then scan the trace papered copy. This tends to clean up the drawing tremendously and makes the pic look a lot better. Trace paper is only like $4 for 50 pages and can be found at any craft shop (Hobby Lobby, Michael's, etc.)

This looks to good to give up on so keep at it.

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PandaRevolution In reply to BLIX007 [2008-04-22 16:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks, that's a really good idea, I didn't think of that at all. Yeah, it's always really annoying having to brightness/contrast the hell out of everything. I'll look into getting some.

Yup, haven't given up yet, it's just taking a while to photoshop...

Thanks ^^

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Sara-Ford [2008-04-15 07:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Ooh~ crystal, that's gonna be tough... I really like how the breastplate looks already, I could never do something that symmetrical and shapely. I always feel like you make yer Anime characters will too little stomach/torso... but then, I am a CLAMP fan and they exaggerate EVERYTHING (See example: [link] ) The shape of the hair splaying out of the ponytail just looks too unnatural to me, more like fire then hair. Really lovin' the eyelashes, but I think to "o-face" there is just not gonna cut it if you want blood, I suggest going with a smirk. The wing/blade/shoulder guards are great X3 All and all, I think this is one of yer better anatomy wise. Good luck coloring this puppy.

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PandaRevolution In reply to Sara-Ford [2008-04-15 20:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the help, I'll change a bunch. I know that I tend to make the stomach/torso area small, but I already drew it, and it's pretty detailed so far, but I'll see what I can do... Thanks for the compliments on my symmetrical ability, doing things with angles and metal like the gundam stuff goes well with me. I'll work on the hair in the back, I'm trying to picture how that would look, but I'm having a hard time, but I'll make it look more natural somehow. Eyelashes are pretty ^^... smirk may be better, I'll have to experiment with other faces. Thanks again, I really like doing armor stuff, I'll definitely have fun with all of the hors I get to spend ^,^

Thanks for helping ^^

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