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Please read the comic from right to left!!

The first page of a comic I've been planning for some while now. c: If I manage it, there will be 10 pages in total. But I'm yet not sure if the following pages will be in color, it was quite some effort...Maybe I'll try out working with screentones, or I'll color it digital or simply keep it black and white

So, the storyline is very simple so far: Prince Fluff visits his friend Kirby in Dreamland, but soon notices things are quite different there than in Patch Land. Of course Kirby wants to help his friend and shows him how to handle stuff where he lives. But it's not that simple as it seemed...

Feedback would be highly appreciated! >w<
Btw I'm sorry it's from right to left, it just so happened, that it was easier for me to arrange the panels ówò
Also sorry for my English, if there are any mistakes please tell me ´w`)

I hope you like it~

Next Page: A Visitor from PatchLand Page 2

Characters (c) Nintendo/HAL

Description
Please read the comic from right to left!!

The first page of a comic I've been planning for some while now. c: If I manage it, there will be 10 pages in total. But I'm yet not sure if the following pages will be in color, it was quite some effort...Maybe I'll try out working with screentones, or I'll color it digital or simply keep it black and white

So, the storyline is very simple so far: Prince Fluff visits his friend Kirby in Dreamland, but soon notices things are quite different there than in Patch Land. Of course Kirby wants to help his friend and shows him how to handle stuff where he lives. But it's not that simple as it seemed...

Feedback would be highly appreciated! >w<
Btw I'm sorry it's from right to left, it just so happened, that it was easier for me to arrange the panels ówò
Also sorry for my English, if there are any mistakes please tell me ´w`)

I hope you like it~

Next Page: A Visitor from PatchLand Page 2

Characters (c) Nintendo/HAL