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crass ad brazen, you stumble downthe path you chew through hearts so
inebriated from your sick indulgence
leeching love and attention from fools
fools who see through you
fools who forgive you
fools you don't deserve
see through you
a stench of rootless vanity surrounds you
it clings to you, and if you could see what
i perceive of you, you would be crushed
...and i would smash your face into a mirror
just to show you who you are
take a closer look now
take a closer look into...
fools who see through you
fools who forgive you
fools you don't deserve
see through you
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Comments: 2
Invisigoth100 [2004-06-06 13:38:24 +0000 UTC]
I love this. I think it'd be a nice touch if you ended this poem with the words fools. It's just a suggestion really.
Kisses Nat xxx
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anima-et-aeris [2004-06-04 08:09:31 +0000 UTC]
"...and i would smash your face into a mirror
just to show you who you are"
I love that... so much.
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