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Published: 2004-03-02 09:05:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 22
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Description step aboard get lost with me.  let's get lost at sea.
a sea of crimson liquid lust, let's get lost at sea.
and lose yourself and all your trust and faith in chivalry, and find yourself renewed let's bathe in carnal savagery

in one moment your adoration suffers sublimation and becomes
everything for which i've hoped and all for which i've prayed.  so what if it will seem depraved.  take hold of me and
take me prey, so i pray!  won't you give in to the
nature of this menagerie and take me prey so i pray.  give in as in myth and liberate your vampiric sanctity, and bathe in me:  the ecstasy of blood

don't ignore this incantation, this invitation, the revelation of my naked throat.  seek the vein, the thrill of pain will ease my surface tension.
then hold me limp and dying to be loving all you do to me
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parallaxian [2004-03-03 01:36:22 +0000 UTC]

well, just imagine someone giving you the freedom to truly be a "satanic concubine" with teeth, claws and all...this poem is a request for a woman to be primal...to let loose all her passions and aggressions...

thanks for your input...add me to your friends...etc.

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Satanic-Concubine [2004-03-02 22:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow...I don't really know what this is about, I might have to read it a few more times, but I like it! Your vocabulary is excellent, and the words just seem to flow...I hope to be able to write like this in the future...

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