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Published: 2010-07-08 05:43:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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A destroyer comes in the night--What a feeling!
What a fright!
I ate up all it's shadow.
And the evening was made right.
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It's really good. It's original and the story is in itself enticing, not that the written style isn't. I think the first line would've sounded better if you had used "at" instead of "the".
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