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Published: 2004-05-14 03:41:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 48
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Description Take off your coat
Time to stay awhile
Musicals upbeat tune
This Fruit you prune
All decays to nothingness
In time
You’ll See
So burn your illegal c.d.s
Listen up
Freshen up
Do what you have to
Cry over the spilt milk that slipped through your grasping hands
Nothing to quench your thirst anymore
The “good old days” weren’t so long ago
You must still wonder why grandpa told long stories
Take your time to learn
But don’t come back still crying
Put on your coat again
Its cold outside
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Comments: 4

lovelyfairy [2004-08-13 19:55:30 +0000 UTC]

I like all your poems... There not like anything i ever have read before... It different.. and different to me is good...

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abandonedpyro [2004-07-04 21:41:41 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing its different. Not only the poem its self but from your usually style of writing. I like it. The words have emotion and meaning. I love how you began and ended the poem on the same note these words made the lessons so much more meaningful.

Take off your coat
Time to stay awhile

Put on your coat again
Its cold outside

I had no idea spilled milk could have such a powerfull meaning.

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j-langer [2004-06-10 03:32:59 +0000 UTC]

this one just makes me laugh cause it's often that i don't take wise advice. spills of milk... cool.

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jenna-dee [2004-05-15 13:14:24 +0000 UTC]

this is really interesting. i really enjoy it. once again a triumph!

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