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PariseDPuppy — Kyla|| Remake||
Published: 2020-11-23 23:59:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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-DO NOT ATTCK THIS PERSON!-Okay i did this cause somethings about this oc bother the shet out of me one her age why is 12 and looks like?! I aged her up to fit how she looks so i made her a collage student.
Two i read her 'backstory' i personally didn't like it her dad gave of lowkey pedo videos to his daughter, and her 'backstory' kind of really didn't make since at all... so here is something i can say to make it better
1. don't make the dad sound like his has a sexual attraction to his child [is wrong on so many levels]
2. i sorta like the idea that he friend was driven to die [as fucked up that is] but i would change it to were she snaps and tries to hurt the "popular girls" and accidently unlock her evil side...which she would end up with a black eye and taken to a place to correct her action, but inside of her correcting her action she bust out of it and runs into a filed with a farmer scythe the she finds it. She soon finds the girls hanging out in a shady places [and i think you get it]
3.changed her clothes because colors before was fighting with each other, so i made everything grey scale and only kept the hair blue but darken it a lil and let the eye be red
-DON'T ATTACK THIS PERSON-
This original creator- x-KylaTheCannibal-x x-KylaTheCannibal-x
