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Published: 2014-02-24 23:58:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 752; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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100% drawn by me. This is my first time that I made something without a base, I hope it looks good.
"My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic & Original Characters (c) Hasbro"
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FurFez [2014-02-25 00:29:32 +0000 UTC]
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First off, I would like to say this is very good for a first time drawing without a base (I know I wasn't that good when I started out). Now on to the critique, I noticed you tried to shade the nose and ear but I believe that shading the whole figure in different areas would enhance your picture, just follow the rules of a light source. The back legs also have three joints and it appears that the one closest to the thigh is missing. I also think the cutie mark should be a little lower and I would consider shortening the length of the neck. Lastly, I think to hooves should be more circular at the bottom. I hope this was helpful, and forgive me if I said anything in an improper manner, but this is my first critique.
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thedutchbrony [2014-02-26 18:01:50 +0000 UTC]
the coat (yellow) maches great with the green eyes i just like it! my colors i prefer is more pinke + purple but with this i can open a new color line ! Thanks for the inspiration!
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