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i... just.... can't.... get this to work.

so the first sketch isn't really a sketch, i was wotkign on it to be made into finsiehd pencils, then my teacher said the panel on the lower right didn't look right. mena, he said it looked cool, but wasn't angled right. he explained it better, but basically, the way the pic was going didn't make the panels flow. if i made him facing the other way, it woudl have worked. and mayeb a differebnt pose. he suggested thumbnails.

i'm not very good with thumbnails. i like to draw and then keep drawing and be done with it. when i make thumbnails there';s,... too much stuff i coudla changed. ><;;; but i did them anyways, so yeah. he picked one and i'm trying to stick to it.

so ghere's how the page is shaping up to be. not really done, as you can tell. in the middle panel, there's gonna be a switchblade held to the detective's back.

if his face looks ugly on teh last page with the angry look ont eh lower lef,t then good. i love pics where th peopel look normal, then when they're angry they're @$$ ugly.

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i... just.... can't.... get this to work.

so the first sketch isn't really a sketch, i was wotkign on it to be made into finsiehd pencils, then my teacher said the panel on the lower right didn't look right. mena, he said it looked cool, but wasn't angled right. he explained it better, but basically, the way the pic was going didn't make the panels flow. if i made him facing the other way, it woudl have worked. and mayeb a differebnt pose. he suggested thumbnails.

i'm not very good with thumbnails. i like to draw and then keep drawing and be done with it. when i make thumbnails there';s,... too much stuff i coudla changed. ><;;; but i did them anyways, so yeah. he picked one and i'm trying to stick to it.

so ghere's how the page is shaping up to be. not really done, as you can tell. in the middle panel, there's gonna be a switchblade held to the detective's back.

if his face looks ugly on teh last page with the angry look ont eh lower lef,t then good. i love pics where th peopel look normal, then when they're angry they're @$$ ugly.