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Published: 2016-11-06 19:15:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 30129; Favourites: 904; Downloads: 184
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EDIT:(I may have changed the lyrics a bit. The first one could barely gave me a breather..... X//w//X Hopefully this one's okay now.)
I didn't know where
we went wrong
I truly thought the two of us could actually get along
What have we done?
or did you want this all along?
Cause we had faith, we believed in you!
But now I guess I'm no longer gonna play a fool
So let's go, let the Time-shift trigger
Let's go, this is now or never
Go ahead and try to hit me if you're able
It's too late to put the mercy on the table.
I can see that you're determined to keep fighting
but every second of your life is decreasing.
I won't let you win, we'll be here together
fighting in this broken time forever
and you know you can't reset when this is all over
so you better not say I didn't warn ya!
Right now you're made
o-o-o-o-of
LO-o-o-o-oVE
LO-o-o-o-oVE
LO-o-o-o-oVE
(3x)
So this is how we are....
and this is how it ends
wish I could turn the timeline back to when we were good friends.
but I'll keep moving forward, so this is your last chance
to redeem yourself off all
the dust tainted on your hands....
Go ahead a try to hit me if your able,
now you're in for a skele-TON of trouble.
So you better keep your eyes on the time yeah
cause you'll never know when KARMA'S gonna get ya.
you can feel your sins crawling up your back
filling up the spaces your heart lacks
You were our savior
yet you chose murder
now face your Retribution...
.
.
.
.
-sighs-
You could have lived in peace
with us together
now you'll live in consequence forever
you don't deserve to live in eternal sorrow
But I guess now you're just a shadow.....
of the person that I
once Lo-o-ove...
LO-o-o-oVE...
So I'll end this for you....
LO-o-o-oVE
Thank you for viewing!Β Β
Undertale (c) Toby Fox
Song (c) Steven Universe
Quantumtale (c) me!!
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Comments: 88
MakiBonzai In reply to ??? [2016-11-19 19:14:49 +0000 UTC]
SO SAD! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS? WHY???
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LittleKitty8204 In reply to ??? [2016-11-16 15:46:03 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Update on Record:
I got the background music running. I've had some pre-recordings but since I'm a girl it's hard to get it to sound like me but I don't want to lower my voice tone. It's coming along pretty okay, I expect to be done by Sunday, next week at most
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biggame4 In reply to LittleKitty8204 [2017-02-14 00:02:17 +0000 UTC]
If you are deciding to do a version of this I recomend it with amella's remix of Stronger Than you, because it has beats similar to a clocks and it would be perfect for time kid sans.Β Β
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13-Lenne-13 In reply to ??? [2016-11-14 16:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Excellent art piece, excellent song OMG! =O
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LittleKitty8204 In reply to ??? [2016-11-14 04:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Dangit trying to find time 2 record but I'm so **** busy I can't find time ;-; I will get this out ASAP
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LindoLandlubbers In reply to ??? [2016-11-13 23:50:43 +0000 UTC]
You have an error, when it says, "orΒ did you wanted this all along?" itΒ is supposed to say, "or did you want this all along?"
Sorry if too many people have said that already..
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perfectshadow06 In reply to LindoLandlubbers [2016-11-14 04:46:38 +0000 UTC]
okay, Thank you for pointing that out. TTwTT
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LittleKitty8204 [2016-11-13 16:07:03 +0000 UTC]
Some other things I'd like to suggest:
Cut out 'of' in 'but every second of your life is decreasing'. Even one syllable can mix up the entire song.
Try changing 'of the person that I once' to 'of the person I once' so the syllables don't mix.
Get rid of 'so' and 'and', it may get confusing for those who want to record in the future. (This is not for me XD)
Hope I could help. I'll start recording soon!
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perfectshadow06 In reply to LittleKitty8204 [2016-11-13 16:43:47 +0000 UTC]
Huh, that part didn't seem to be a problem when I sang it. o_o; I guess whichever comforts you in recording then. Perhaps if I listen to the outcome of your record, I could make arrangements to the lyrics. ^_^ Sound Fair?
I appreciate your help dear but I would also like a demo if it is okay. ^///^ Take your time on the recording and sing the lyrics any way you see fit. Have fun and wish you the best of luck!Β
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reder14 [2016-11-13 15:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Can you either make a music video of this or get a different YouTuber to make a video please? I want to hear this song in full action~
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LittleKitty8204 [2016-11-13 06:50:23 +0000 UTC]
Hey some quick edits I'd like to suggest:
Instead of 'or did you want this all along' put 'or did you want this for so long'. It stops the repeat effect.
Also, instead of 'but every second of life is decreasing' put 'but every second you'll be dying'
Lastly, try 'dust tainted ON your hands' instead of 'dust tainted in your hands'.
Please take this into consideration. This is awesome! Better than I can write.
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perfectshadow06 In reply to LittleKitty8204 [2016-11-13 07:17:38 +0000 UTC]
oooh! you make very good suggestions my dear. ^w^ But I'm also trying to base the lyrics off of my story. The "or did you wanted this all along" part comes from when Chara was given a second chance to live but still chose the same path after all this time. Then the "every second of life is decreasing" I really meant for it to be "every second of YOUR life is decreasing." XD (I apologize since I was making this in a really late hour and I was sleep drunk..... ) and finally, YES you can correct that 'dust tainted ON your hands' as it was an honest mistake thank you. Q//w//Q
I'm happy you like my lyrics and I appreciate your help to improve it.
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perfectshadow06 In reply to LittleKitty8204 [2016-11-13 06:56:08 +0000 UTC]
sure! Please don't forget to credit me. Ow~/ perhaps use my artwork as a cover just for reference as where it came from.
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dbg18 [2016-11-07 17:26:00 +0000 UTC]
ho my goood!Β Β
it isΒ amazing! great job, the art and the song, it reallyyy fan-sans-ticΒ Β Β !!
I also want a version of undertale so, but for my OC.
You think you could help meΒ ?
but in Spanish, if you can not, no problem, no drama okayΒ ?
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Dree-B [2016-11-07 16:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Those lyrics and this picture just made me cry ;-; Why so awesome?!?!
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LisalovesWifi [2016-11-07 12:43:17 +0000 UTC]
*Insert Markiplier opera here*
*LE GASP
I LUV ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!
I swear, when I finally get actual internet connection in this hell, the minute I get a youtube account, Imma make this into a song with an animation to go with it!
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Gameknightreloaded [2016-11-07 06:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Hey, can you draw a certain character of mine in the style of quantamtale? His name is Lag!Sans. He is an error berry child. I think it would look really good
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perfectshadow06 In reply to Gameknightreloaded [2016-11-07 17:32:30 +0000 UTC]
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FerroAnime In reply to ??? [2016-11-07 02:05:11 +0000 UTC]
please somebody make this into a new song! someone sing it! cuz ik i cant do it Q.Q
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XenomorphicDragon In reply to ??? [2016-11-07 01:36:02 +0000 UTC]
Something about this really caught my eye, I'm not sure what it is, but I like it.
*leans towards screen with squinty eyes*
Also really like the song.
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Dunked-On-AsrielTH In reply to ??? [2016-11-07 00:03:20 +0000 UTC]
sung it. bit fast but love it!
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SkullForge890 In reply to ??? [2016-11-06 23:57:23 +0000 UTC]
I sand your song to the best I could, IT WAS AWESOME!
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risuchan23 [2016-11-06 23:19:08 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I LOVE THIS VERSION OF YOUR SONG
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Endlesshunter [2016-11-06 23:05:35 +0000 UTC]
nyeeeh much feels. beautiful words. Much sads.Β
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MissPunnyPuns In reply to ??? [2016-11-06 21:51:32 +0000 UTC]
akakakakkakkakkaahhhhhhhahhahahhahahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sooooooooooo just- AHHHHH!!!!!
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jacksonred In reply to ??? [2016-11-06 21:17:35 +0000 UTC]
I just sang that.....awesomeness man just plain awesomeness.
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GalaxyGal-11 In reply to ??? [2016-11-06 20:18:58 +0000 UTC]
i'm sitting here singing this
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chloecats7 In reply to ??? [2016-11-06 19:26:06 +0000 UTC]
;U; i want to hear someone sing this so much thisΒ THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOL AND sad ;U;
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