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Published: 2006-05-08 14:54:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1670; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 183
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thxs for the crits guys...deadline over!Related content
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First panel: What are the lines angling from the corner of the first persons face? they almost look like antenna, but for his eyes?
The guy taking the punch is off his nose needs to be angled more with his head (tilting away as well with force of the blow I think)
The babies mouth looks odd--like it has big lips (is that teeth?) kinda "children's cartoony" if it is teeth.
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again i think moving the camera around would help, upshots, down shots just for some variety. most of the shots are medium shots and it kind of makes it less exciting.
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well apart from the guy thats taking a punch this one is awsome
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