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Published: 2009-11-05 04:58:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 356; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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this isn't kansas anymore.swept up in the tumult,
lost within the winds, i find myself
transported to a time and place
far away from home.
we wake and find ourselves in dystopia.
something troubles this soul.
the death of decency,
the decay of sentiments;
men deep in slumber care no longer
for the outcries of the oppressed.
we wake and find ourselves in anarchy.
lawless, the leaders themselves
no longer bother to punish the wicked.
hands tied
hands washed
just like pontius pilate
while the innocent are crucified.
i cannot remain blind any longer.
restless, i toss and turn
trembling with cold sweat
and an aching in my very psyche
for the sanctuary
now left destitute by evil hands.
weapons fashioned out of words.
death on our doorsteps with
more slain in their wake.
cry for the martyrs
and weep for those yet to come.
expelled from paradise,
this desolate land is no longer
the place which i call home.
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Comments: 7
katarthis [2010-03-30 16:28:11 +0000 UTC]
Far better than the usual "I've had it, I'm leaving, never shall I return" normally spoken in these situations.
k
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LavenderMystt [2009-11-08 17:34:10 +0000 UTC]
This touched me. Men/women do slumber every where, every day, Peter. They don't see or don't care. I'm glad you didn't stay asleep.
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losingmyfaith [2009-11-05 19:00:46 +0000 UTC]
aw well written poem, i liked it (: sorry about the situation, though ):
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frisca-freak [2009-11-05 15:44:29 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure how I should describe the effect this piece had on me... you've left me in awe with your writing once more, but there's not a little pain and regret in this, it's hard not to feel it.
I'm sorry, I'm rambling, I just really don't know what to say. I guess for now I will say that you've done it once again and wrote an amazing deviation, and well, I hope all is well with you.
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MistRaven [2009-11-05 13:41:48 +0000 UTC]
very emotional piece. Sorry to hear of its origin but not surprised at the quality of the piece. After all every great piece of art be it penned or brushed are the result of some emotional event well done love
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nighthawk81 [2009-11-05 08:17:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
Have the holes in your psyche healed yet? I can see the wounds from here.
Prayer is ongoing. I hope you have recovered, dear friend.
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