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Published: 2003-05-11 08:32:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Do you believe in love?
I asked myself
as I watched them bicker
and moan
Do I believe in love?
I asked her
She blinked and said she loved me
Held her arm within mine
soft and warm
Why would you say a thing like that?
She left me.
He said no,
and so she left
my pillows stained
with year old tears
felt wet again
Do you believe in love?
I asked myself tonight
as I watched myself
from within myself
The fire died
as she didn\'t question why
and left
I wondered what I thought
Do I believe in love?
No.
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mars-like [2003-07-12 07:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. That's beautiful. "as I watched myself/From within myself" Such wonderful words. Such a hard subject, that sort of deadness inside. But you wrote it beautifully. Thus making it, in and of itself, beautiful.

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ecstaticapathy [2003-05-11 08:38:00 +0000 UTC]

man i can relate to this.. great job!

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