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Published: 2002-02-18 20:03:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Printing ErrorStare out into the void
run alongside the stream
Sun flows, with it my thoughts from the ream.
Printer jams, i fall all down inside myself.
Pleading and running, ;save me from myself;
everyone walks on by.
Thoughts continue, compounding into the tray.
I always thought that i'd like to say,
to you - how much I cared.
I can't really see out to the sun anymore,
the dirt fills my eyes.
Tears are flowing, and I feel myself begin to rise.
Your hands reached out and held me in your arms,
such sweet arms.
the wind flew through the air,
and carried upon it a whisp of your hair.
Hair flies back, tethered to your mind.
Such a beautiful mind,
I pour myself into you. All the [random] characters,
hold no meaning to you, but to me ... the jam is clearing.
Sun is shining, and my mind is free to run it's course.
Date: 02/18/02
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Comments: 3
hm... i always like original ideas like this... a printer jam inside your body is certainly a nice idea... after reviewing some random poems recently i've come to realize there is somewhat of a lack of creativity around here, but i digress... i still think parts of this are a bit cliche'd... like "Your hands reached out and held me in your arms,
such sweet arms." and the stanza before that as well... just was hoping for a bit of fresh air with such a fun subject... personally i woulda stuck with things around the printer... like having your mind flow through the computer wire to the printer er something neato like that... just my take on things... nice poem tho
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every day she wears the same thing, i think she smokes pot, she is everything i want, she is everything im not
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so what if there's two?
good stuff man!
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i am mikey
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