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This Terrible DistanceThese times sometimes rob me of my words, sometimes rob me of my feelings.
I find it hard, because I'm trodding over the same old ground over and over again.
I'm living in my memories, and not the present.
Time when I see you again is so far away that I can't see your light
at the ending of this tunnel.
This darkness is enshrouding.
Once in awhile, I read your mind over this copper line
once in awhile I see your face, through this mess of time
My memories are a bit faded now, and I seeing you so
dangerous
I want to run into the darkness again, I want to throw it all away.
I can't, though
Everytime I look at the floor, I end up staring at the sky
I wonder if you see the same sky
You're so far away, but you're right within my grasp
Sleeping last night, I woke up with you in my arms
I stared into your eyes, and I spoke your name
I awoke, with tears in my eyes
My memories, are so sweet in their innocence.
I remember the way you bounced and moved in the light
the way you walked like a woman
binding eyes to your graceful form
I hate these memories,
browsing through an expensive store
with only a couple dollars in my pocket
This time, is so expansive
so much distance
Living in these memories, I love you so much.
I read your mail today, this line delivers you to me
I smiled and looked up from the floor
My heart was full, and all of this was worth it.
Waiting here for you, I'll be alright.
This distance, isn't too great for us to overcome.
Not with our love, and our binding.
06/17/02
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Comments: 6
tragic-prose [2002-07-27 03:28:17 +0000 UTC]
being away from a loved one is very difficult. Nice poem
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lowra [2002-07-27 03:19:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh, this is completely touching and insanely beautiful beyond belief. I'm just in awe. I know how this feels..indeed. Very, very well done.
And thank you so much for your amazingly sweet comment!!! I'm so glad you like my poem!
Lowra
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phantomdata [2002-07-27 03:17:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, for the kind words. I am glad, that you took some of my emotion away with you. Oddly, I never thought of remembering these words of bound up passion... thank you, and I shall hold this one close - so as not to forget it in whatever desperation may come to this relationship.
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crystalcage [2002-07-27 03:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Exquisite. I love how this was written
such emotion, it made me cry.
I hope all works well for you
dont forget these words you've put together when hard times strike.
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drippingblood [2002-07-27 03:08:15 +0000 UTC]
my god what a beautiful poem." I'm living in my memories, and not the present. " that i can relate you living in memories is the most painful thing. not facing the fact that you have lost..something you truly love and it hurts. and its depressing beautiful poem
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