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*This actually has next to nothing to do with Lilliput, though it is G/t.Rules:
Write something worth reading! This is a biggie. I simply will not respond to horrible starting posts. Bad comments later on will receive a warning. (Likely after I ignore it for a few days)
Paragraph form, not script form.
No having an overpowered character!
Nothing fatal.
No swearing. (you can say that they swore, or use something like 'Dang frizzle frazzle phooey to the nth degree,' but don't actually swear. (Also, interwebz cookie to the first person to name where I got that from.))
No fetish related stuff.
No sex. None. I won't RP that.
If you switch, I still want a good starting comment. I will ignore any that just say 'switch'
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"No, of course not," his captor said as someone tied Zylar's wrists together firmly with a thin rope.
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"Who all else is here?" Zylar asked confusedly, testing the bonds, 'Nope, they might be thin, but they're pretty firm.' he thought to himself.
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"About a quarter of a regiment."
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"A regiment? Isn't that something like an army or military term?" Zylar asked confusedly.
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"Yes," came the reply, very short. "Of course it is. What were you expecting, the girl scouts?"
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Zylar laughed, "Good one, But I was actually expecting the Boy scouts with my order of cheddar popcorn." He joked right back.
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"Ha ha, very funny. And you thought they'd deliver it like this?"
((By the way... sorry, but I don't remember... are his eyes still closed, or has he opened them to see them yet?))
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(You know, I was thinking he had a blind fold on the entire time. ^^")
Zylar chuckled, "Maybe. Umm, can I open my eyes now?" He asked.
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((No, but that might have been a good idea...))
"...Maybe," came the reply. "First, you have to promise -no, swear on your life- that you won't try anything. One wrong move, and you'll be filled with so many arrows that you'll look like an oversized pincushion. Got it?"
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(Before we continue, I have an idea of what my character looks like, and I'm basing him of a character I made in a video game, it's called Phantasy Star, and so I kinda want my character to have white hair, tan skin, and purple eyes with cat-like slits in them, is that okay? Or should I normalize him?)
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((Sure, why not... the whole thing's going to get kinda weird in a moment anyway.))
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(Yahoo!)
"Sure, I promise not do anything, just don't freak when you see my eyes, okay?" Zylar said before opening his eyes, and blinking them a few times to get used to the light.
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"Don't worry, we have bigger things to worry about than what color your eyes are," his captor assured him. Once Zylar's etes were open, he would see that of all the men standing around him, half with swords drawn and the other half with bows, the arrows of which were pointed straight at Zylar's heart, not one of them was over a foot tall.
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Zylar's purple cat-like eyes scanned the entire group of small people with undisguised surprise, "It would be a bad idea to faint, wouldn't it?" He said blandly.
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"Why do you say that?"asked the man perched on his shoulder, whose own sword was still against Zylar's throat.
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"Well, are there people behind me? And if so, what do you think will happen if I faint?" Zylar said simply.
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"How nice of you to be concerned. However, there isn't anyone behind you, so you don't have to worry."
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"Ah, but what about you? If I fall over, you would fall as well, right? And why does it sound like you thought I wouldn't have cared if there was anyone behind me?" Zylar asked, feeling slightly annoyed.
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"Don't worry, I can handle it," he said. "As for thst assumption... well, most giants wouldn't. Care, that is."
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Zylar tried to turn his head in order to see the man, "A giant? Is that what you think I am?" He asked plainly.
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"Obviously," he said, rolling his eyes. "What else?"
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"Hmph, while I might be a bit taller than the average man, I assure you I'm no giant, at least, not where I come from." Zylar stated, ignoring the eye roll.
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"Well, here you're a giant."
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"Ah, I suppose that's true." Zylar said with a careful shrug, not wanting to knock the man off.
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"Sit still, why don't you!"
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"Hmph, not even a please and thank you?" Zylar said while rolling his eyes.
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"Would that make you more cooperative?"
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"Well, if you were more polite about all this, then yes." Zylar said with a nod.
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"Well, in that case, please stop moving around so much," he ordered indignantly.
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"Hmph, was that so hard?" Zylar said as he made himself perfectly still.
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"Yes," his captor said stubbornly.
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"Stubborn guy, huh? You seem to be braver than the rest, considering your even talking to me the way you are, I mean, if I was in your position, I would be afraid of making the guy ten times my size angry." Zylar said with approval.
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"You're only about six times my size," he corrected him. "And we both know -or at least, I know and you should know- that if you try anything, you won't live to regret it for more than a few seconds."
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Zylar sighed, "Here I am, complimenting you, and you decide to threaten me, how nice." He finished sarcastically.
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"It wasn't a threat, it was a warning."
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"About the same, don't you think?" Zylar replied blandly.
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"No, of course not."
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Zylar sighed, "Alright, whatever you say." He said with annoyance.
The Zylar gave a quick look with his eyes at his captor, "Do I at least get the pleasure of knowing your name? It gets a bit annoying constantly calling you the captor in my head." He asked sincerely.
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"Have you been calling me that?" he asked. "Well, I'm Sargent Harris. And you are?"
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"Well, you kinda are like a captor, Mr. Harris, and my name is Zylar." Zylar said truthfully.
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"It's Sargent Harris, Zylar," he corrected with a frown.
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"I'm not part of the army though, so do I have to say that?" Zylar asked with a frown.
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"Yes. It's still my title, whether or not you're in the army," the sargent said, frowning back.
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"Alright, Sargent." Zylar said with a sigh.
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"Thank you," Sargent Harris said.
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"Your welcome, Sargent Harris, what happens now?" Zylar asked what was on his mind.
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"Well, we've still got to determine how much of a threat you are, and plan accordingly."
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"Have I proved to be much of a threat? I mean I must look frightening, being so much larger than everyone here, but have I actually done anything to warrant being called a threat?" Zylar asked, slightly annoyed at the way these people were going about the situation.
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"Well, no, but it's better to be safe than sorry."
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"I suppose...oh well, can we just do whatever you were going to do? Escort me to some kind of camp where you'll probably put me in a very large cage or some other form of prison." Zylar said, his annoyance being made quite clear by his tone of voice.
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