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Published: 2007-01-21 05:03:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1067; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 3
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I'm a one girl car wreckOn a bridge to nowhere
My hair is limp and dull,
but dyed red to fool you into thinking
That I am blazing, confident
I bite my nails, tear my hair
Pick my skin and scream distortions
I'm not as pretty as you think
But you ignore the bruises and scars
I'm a fucking wreck baby
And I'll pull you down with me
I will drag you into the depths
but I can't help you back out
(unless you are here to save me)
I am not real
I am just that beautiful mess
That everyone wants to fix...
but no one can
I will make you cry and I will make you hurt
I'm a fucking whore but I'm a prude
Who'll use you just to feel loved
Then blame you for making me ashamed
And I am not the sweet princess
Helpless in a tower
And you are not my prince charming
I am not as weak as you think
But I still need you to save me
Don't you know?
I am crazy
The girl that should be locked away
My eyes hold too much misery to be seen
My body is too worn
And my faces is contorted with desperation
I'm just a one girl fucking car wreck
Losing
my
grip
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Comments: 8
ziggurat-8 [2010-05-31 03:22:18 +0000 UTC]
what can i say that i already havent? you are such a beautiful poet.
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Sunrise-starburn [2009-09-24 03:06:12 +0000 UTC]
Alright, I'm sorry for doing that awesome stalker thing and commenting on almost everything, but I'm getting into your stuff.
Don't doubt your work this is very good. I really like the setup and spacing of the last few lines with the hit of 'grip' - it made the impression that I think you meant it to.
Wonderful.
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allie-xx [2008-11-25 07:12:36 +0000 UTC]
It's fabulous. A perfect description of my beautiful love's current girlfriend.
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falling4nothing [2007-04-01 15:50:33 +0000 UTC]
"I am just that beautiful mess
That everyone wants to fix...
but no one can"
I really like this line, there is so much feeling in this poem
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WhiteRasengan [2007-01-21 23:11:36 +0000 UTC]
you're getting back into the swing of writing!
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