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Speaking seriously, this is a rewritten scene for the whole story of Naruto I've just thought

Already have on mind what'll come next!: As Yamato and everyone would be very doubtful of if Sasuke's words were really true, or just a way to manipulate them. An overall more convoluted plan for them to trick Konoha into wasting more ninjas and weaken them

Here Sai getting a bit emotional arguing solely by guts and emotions, that why not Sasuke would like to be help on such a tight situation?. He believing that indeed, what Sakura heard on that message was true, after all, he send such a type of message so Orochimaru didn't notice

Naruto and Sakura agreeing with him and making passes for the events earlier.

That still, the story would be filled of tension as the again assembled team to rescue Sasuke reunited, it was vague and uncertain, because as good they know. It could be a trap.

...

Honestly I thought of this what if after reading One Piece, ¡I love how Oda writes it as a "staircase" knowing the Strawhats are beating up a crucial step for a greater challenge!
...

Indeed Sasuke threw an alert message for help, and genuinely, this newly formed arc would be about defeating this villain Orochimaru build up since the early story once and for all.
Leaving well clear and giving all respect to Orochimaru, that if Naruto didn't come at time, he would have taken Sasuke's body, evolved his Sharingan and become a bigger threat than Itachi, if not as big that shady boss of the Akatsuki must be

Orochimaru's forces are himself full Yamata no Orochi, Kabuto with a less optimized Snake sage mode, "Sasuke", Jugo, Suigetsu, Karin and Dosu (Who survived because I like him)

But ultimately, and despite have killed Orochimaru, (Duper death no resurrections or anything💀) Sasuke have lied, and shortly after his curse seal begone.
In front of Naruto in a similar way to Sakura's farewell he went away. He still has the poignant thought of vengeance on his mind, even if he wanted to prove wrong Itachi by having love in his heart, he prepare to go to kill his brother

(The Hebi members do following Sasuke still, since they genuinely come to admire Sasuke for who he is from earlier!)

...

Mmm I'll just fully vent my ideas for a rewritten Naruto loud and clear!!

I sorta like the Otsutsuki, from afar.
They were actually panspermia agents seeking to extend their kind!, and they did this by creating inferior images of themselves. Since making direct descend quite literally half their powers.

This, the humans growing trought generations the capabilities and powers of the Otsutsuki clan as they eventually ascend as powerful as their ancestors and join them into the stars.

But for this, they till the worlds they conquer, invasive they were to those we know as the summoned animals like Manda, Gamabunta and more fantastical animals, back when the world was an idyllic and chaotic state of sage power.

They teared off everything they have, and for the few that submitted to them: They allowed them a chunk of their world on another dimension and to perhaps, raise this humans with their previous culture and methods of training. Their liberty exchanged by a contract

But for those that opposed them fiercely, like the monkeys, (Sun Wukong fan here) who their mighty power (Monky goes 8gates+sage mode🦧🐒💢💥Otsutsuki be💀) was sealed and their persona brought another dimension, all of their members trapped on a mountain head and hands sticking out, hoping for a human contracts them to set them free

(And just a little thing, I'll also rewrite Hiruzen as a genuine father like figure to Naruto, and for him have inherited by contract Enma to him after his death)

👽👹 ¡¡The Otsutsuki's succeeded on their plans!!, and because of that, we won't see them anymore 🤑

And how the story changes with this!, the tailed beast are a loud cry of the past, like Apocalymon, and they can't be shut or destroyed. For them to die they'll just reincarnate on another animal, or worse, that if the balance of this earth it's shattered enough. The Jubi being a manifestation of the same earth so fierce even the Otsutsuki fear them!!

If nothing the story now would be filled of people seeking that speculative zenith of power, the Rinnegan. Most of times convinced of forging the truth or a better world. Unaware of if they could bring the impending doom of the earth, but ultimately, for it stand out the desire and ideals for the wellbeing of all

Description
Speaking seriously, this is a rewritten scene for the whole story of Naruto I've just thought

Already have on mind what'll come next!: As Yamato and everyone would be very doubtful of if Sasuke's words were really true, or just a way to manipulate them. An overall more convoluted plan for them to trick Konoha into wasting more ninjas and weaken them

Here Sai getting a bit emotional arguing solely by guts and emotions, that why not Sasuke would like to be help on such a tight situation?. He believing that indeed, what Sakura heard on that message was true, after all, he send such a type of message so Orochimaru didn't notice

Naruto and Sakura agreeing with him and making passes for the events earlier.

That still, the story would be filled of tension as the again assembled team to rescue Sasuke reunited, it was vague and uncertain, because as good they know. It could be a trap.

...

Honestly I thought of this what if after reading One Piece, ¡I love how Oda writes it as a "staircase" knowing the Strawhats are beating up a crucial step for a greater challenge!
...

Indeed Sasuke threw an alert message for help, and genuinely, this newly formed arc would be about defeating this villain Orochimaru build up since the early story once and for all.
Leaving well clear and giving all respect to Orochimaru, that if Naruto didn't come at time, he would have taken Sasuke's body, evolved his Sharingan and become a bigger threat than Itachi, if not as big that shady boss of the Akatsuki must be

Orochimaru's forces are himself full Yamata no Orochi, Kabuto with a less optimized Snake sage mode, "Sasuke", Jugo, Suigetsu, Karin and Dosu (Who survived because I like him)

But ultimately, and despite have killed Orochimaru, (Duper death no resurrections or anything💀) Sasuke have lied, and shortly after his curse seal begone.
In front of Naruto in a similar way to Sakura's farewell he went away. He still has the poignant thought of vengeance on his mind, even if he wanted to prove wrong Itachi by having love in his heart, he prepare to go to kill his brother

(The Hebi members do following Sasuke still, since they genuinely come to admire Sasuke for who he is from earlier!)

...

Mmm I'll just fully vent my ideas for a rewritten Naruto loud and clear!!

I sorta like the Otsutsuki, from afar.
They were actually panspermia agents seeking to extend their kind!, and they did this by creating inferior images of themselves. Since making direct descend quite literally half their powers.

This, the humans growing trought generations the capabilities and powers of the Otsutsuki clan as they eventually ascend as powerful as their ancestors and join them into the stars.

But for this, they till the worlds they conquer, invasive they were to those we know as the summoned animals like Manda, Gamabunta and more fantastical animals, back when the world was an idyllic and chaotic state of sage power.

They teared off everything they have, and for the few that submitted to them: They allowed them a chunk of their world on another dimension and to perhaps, raise this humans with their previous culture and methods of training. Their liberty exchanged by a contract

But for those that opposed them fiercely, like the monkeys, (Sun Wukong fan here) who their mighty power (Monky goes 8gates+sage mode🦧🐒💢💥Otsutsuki be💀) was sealed and their persona brought another dimension, all of their members trapped on a mountain head and hands sticking out, hoping for a human contracts them to set them free

(And just a little thing, I'll also rewrite Hiruzen as a genuine father like figure to Naruto, and for him have inherited by contract Enma to him after his death)

👽👹 ¡¡The Otsutsuki's succeeded on their plans!!, and because of that, we won't see them anymore 🤑

And how the story changes with this!, the tailed beast are a loud cry of the past, like Apocalymon, and they can't be shut or destroyed. For them to die they'll just reincarnate on another animal, or worse, that if the balance of this earth it's shattered enough. The Jubi being a manifestation of the same earth so fierce even the Otsutsuki fear them!!

If nothing the story now would be filled of people seeking that speculative zenith of power, the Rinnegan. Most of times convinced of forging the truth or a better world. Unaware of if they could bring the impending doom of the earth, but ultimately, for it stand out the desire and ideals for the wellbeing of all