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Published: 2013-05-27 23:19:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 4026; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 14
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Happy Memorial Day all!The Operative|PG-13|Comic|Superhero|spy
Anyway, I spent mine on the first page of my comic!
Enjoy!
Prologue:
Next Page:
Artist's note: Due to the action scenes and general violence, this comic may contain some blood/gore.
Art (C) =AgentWhiteHawk 2013 all rights reserved.
The Operative comic (C) =AgentWhiteHawk /WhiteHawkComics 2013 All rights reserved.
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Comments: 77
This is lovely if you mind if I can Crit this
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Ok then
U capture the reader just fine in this page
But what really hits me was the when arrow said what's was that? Idk if he just tremble or not but it look like nothing happen to him in those parts
When the cab was coming you should made us blurry because that part is he's point if view (like the reader is actually him)
And everything is fine I love how you made he's eye rolled back and the reflection from he's pal
All always the rain is again Amazing!!!!!!
Very original when starting a comic so I give you that
Third is the over use if the texture I think I'm sure it's suppose to be a nighttime theme but the texture you makes a sunset theme so you should pull the opacity down just a little......
The shading and lighting is absolutely
O U T S T A N D I N G you know how to keep the reader still in that page I mean I keep looking at like 5times
The scene really had me in the edge of my seat making me guess for more or wondering what will happen
Overall very nice and outstanding piece
Rate:4.5 stars
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Thank you!
I have me reasons for most of what I did. I was going to blur the taxi, but the point was I wanted the reader to know that there was a car coming toward him, it might have been a bit of a mystery what happed if the Taxi wasn't clear.
As for the texture, that was also intentional. In the citadel, all the light is saturated, and generally unpleasant. It's also either Blue, red or a bright saturated yellow. I wanted the light to have a strain that made things more mysterious, and more unpleasant for the characters. Basically, it sets the mood.
But thank you!
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Great start Jen! but one thing, is it nighttime in the page? Or sunrise or what?
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It's night time. But part of the personality of the Citadel city, is wherever you go, the lighting is really strong, and whatever color tome is really saturated.
and Thanks! The next page will answer some of the questions that the first page draws.
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ok cause at forst i thought it was at night but then the golden rain kinda gave hints it was dawn or dusk.
but then the first three panels i thought it was a different dog because the eye color changed
and i think the light should've gotten a bit brighter if the taxi was coming in front of him
sorry if i sound a little critical..
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Yeah, the eye color can be a bit confusing because he's bi-eyed. (Eyes are two different colors)
As for the light in front of him, I actually had that in the old page, but I kinda forgot to do it again, this process was long I had some trouble trying to been my bases covered with all the lighting.
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well it certainly is alot of fine deatil
just be careful with the storyboard and try to make it more understandle, like what was he doing in the middle of the road? was he talking to himself? where did the rat come from? things like that
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It is a bit unclear why, but I wanted it to be a mystery. I wanted the beginning to be really like, wow. What just happed there? I intend to explain everything in the next page.
and The Rat was sitting on top of one of the garbage cans on the other side of the street scrimmaging for food.
But I'll make sure to leave things less up to the imagination in the future and make them as clear as possible.
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good
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Haha! Its finished! Yay! This turned out great Jen!
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Yeah, well it's a pleasure to be able to watch such an amazing artist put together a piece of artwork such as this one. I now LOVE live streaming.
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Oh cool, you do a comic now. c:
Seems successful!
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I'm curious what come as next! I need to know if he survived!
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I'm so mysterious... You shall not know till I get the next page done muahahaha XD
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I will know it anyway soon, because I'm watching you.
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