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Published: 2004-02-14 00:17:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Torn...between who I was
And who I am
My simple innocence, now gone
The way I thought the world
Was a kind place, how it isn't
How running around in my backyard
Gave me the same thrill pot does now

As a child I had such high hopes for myself
I was gonna turn out good
If my childhood self could only see me now
I never thought I would think this way
Or be this way

My family is ashamed of me
But I don't blame them
A couple years ago, I would have been too.
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Comments: 4

insomnia-mae [2004-02-15 05:33:26 +0000 UTC]

this is really really good!!

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-02-14 20:45:05 +0000 UTC]

megan, I cant help but feel I took part in your corruption.... and did nothing to correct it....i dont think your family is ashamed of you, and if they are, they should be ashamed of themselves. no matter what, you always have me though

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ProfoundDesolation [2004-02-14 03:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The advice is greatly appreciated!

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bleusoul [2004-02-14 00:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's depressing. Great though. Polish it a bit, poems can always shine brighter.

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