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Published: 2004-02-14 00:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Standing before the long journey I must face
Desperately thinking I don't want to leave this place
All the memories, I can't forget
Even the bad times, crimson regret
In our place we layed for hours
You said you loved me, you sealed it with flowers
But I have to leave you, I have to let you go
It tears me up inside as you cry and whisper "no"
Crying, weeping, sobbing, our hands slowly part
Screaming inside, this is breaking my heart
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Comments: 5

oblivious-devotion [2004-02-15 06:55:11 +0000 UTC]

you already know i like this one. i think i have to agree with you about the flowers-hours thing though...lol

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insomnia-mae [2004-02-15 05:31:26 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SOO....WOW!! AMAZING!! I'M IMPRESSED!!

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-02-14 20:38:20 +0000 UTC]

lol, I was wondering... lol, this Is SOOOOO good, you should have read yours. shown everyone else, what theres should have been more like

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ProfoundDesolation [2004-02-14 03:15:48 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!!! Well, i moved away from my best friend so its kinda based on her....but i'm not a lesbian so i altered it so it's about a guy. lol!

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bleusoul [2004-02-14 00:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Just for an english class? Not bad at all for a requirement! lol! Does this poem have an actual story behind it?

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