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kodama [2002-03-26 16:05:41 +0000 UTC]

I think it is good, you should try to expand on this. I'd love to hear more poetry from you. It sounds kind of tragic, if I interpret this right . Short 'n sweet, sometimes a good way to go

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phwelo [2002-03-26 13:56:15 +0000 UTC]

short poems are the best kind. I think anyways. They tell everything without being all stupid and overly descriptive (like lots of poems tend to be) good shit
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justin-333 [2002-03-26 09:11:11 +0000 UTC]

its an o-k poem!! kinda short like spen said! check out some of my poems, and u can see how i write and u might pick something up! but nice work for your fist poem ever!
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Life Is But Another Way To Torture ones Soul, But A Soul Would Not Exist Without Life

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spen [2002-03-26 09:07:21 +0000 UTC]

It's a little short for my tastes, but it has nice basics.

-Spen wonders where welsh people come from-

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